When You Were Mine (13/?)

Apr 03, 2014 21:10

Title: When You Were Mine (13/?)
Author: fortunata13
Pairing: Cara/Kahlan
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Word Count: 4433
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Most certainly, I do not own these characters.
Summary: This chapter involves topless consumption of pizza, IT nerdiness (not a real word, I don't think), a pretty dress, and a mysterious phone call ( Read more... )

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bsofthewest April 4 2014, 04:30:48 UTC
OMFG, the plot thickens...I love this fic! You slay me with their relationship and the sass between the two of them. Maxine, you little minx.

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fortunata13 April 5 2014, 11:17:33 UTC
I slay myself, too. These two crazy women who can't admit that they are crazy about each other -- so silly.

I'm really glad you're enjoying it.

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fortunata13 April 5 2014, 11:30:22 UTC
Tell me about it; I'm going to have to keep an eye Maxine, that's for sure. Kahlan knows she's set unrealistic expectation regarding this date with Sabrina. However, those of us who have experienced intense heartbreak are always hoping someone will come along and erase all the pain of the past. Sadly, only a time machine can accomplish that. Hmm, maybe this fic should have been a Warehouse 13 crossover.

Thanks for the visit StvJ.

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laurilee59 April 4 2014, 05:14:45 UTC
Well this just took an interesting turn. Who the hell was little Miss PI talking too? Talk about a curve ball. Cara needs to step up and tell Kahlan why she left in the 1st place. You got us on the ropes with this update, can't wait to see where your going with this and just who all the players are. Great job!!

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fortunata13 April 5 2014, 11:49:54 UTC
Curve ball, indeed. The trial is nearing so I expect we'll get some answers. I predict a few bombshells in the near future. I've barely started on ch 14 so it's all up in the air. Although one bit I wrote surprised the heck out of me, and will definitely throw the prosecution for a loop. It'll be very emotional for Kahlan in particular.

I may reach out to you for legal advice again -- only if you have the time, of course.

It's funny, I posted a little 1930's gangster fic a few days ago; as it turns out, channeling my inner mobster is much easier than getting in touch with my inner lawyer. It's probably because I spent most of childhood watching classic Hollywood cinema. Turning on my TV more than once a year would probably help.

Thanks for reading!

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laurilee59 April 6 2014, 08:47:35 UTC
Looking forward to your twists & turns. Be glad to help you with whatever you need.

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katvrah April 4 2014, 12:35:28 UTC
I don't think the PI is a traitor.Maybe she called this woman who used to work for Kahlan's mum,from the lesbian couple.She seemed to care about Cara's case.I really laughed with Cara teasing, being naked and all.I so hope that Kahlan will break up with her girlfriend soon and do smt with Cara,I'd say in the next chapter ;-)

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fortunata13 April 5 2014, 11:52:41 UTC
There's no telling what Maxine's agenda is but she definitely has one. I think Sabrina is going to get kicked to the curb sooner rather than later.

Stay tuned!

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astscott21 April 4 2014, 14:27:59 UTC
So the plot thickens. I wonder who Maxine is talking to it does not seem to be against Cara so maybe they will help with the case. OH kahlan has to make a decision about what she wants in her life ( be it Sabrina or Cara the one she truly loves ). Good update you still leave us hanging in suspense can't wait for the next update hopefully we will get a few answers and Kahlan will finally make a decision about Sabrina. I hope Kahlan will finally tell Cara how she feels that's just wishful thinking on my part. I know it is complicated because of the trial. Anyway thanks again.

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fortunata13 April 5 2014, 11:59:59 UTC
This chapter was pretty light but it certainly provided plenty of food for thought. Kahlan isn't very good at hiding her feelings, but Cara is an expert at it. As I said before, if these two are going to get back together, Cara is going to have to ppour her heart out. Deep down, Kahlan doesn't want to be with anyone other Cara.

Thank you for reading.

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