Part-Time Mine for parksandpens

Aug 20, 2015 15:15

Title: Part-Time Mine
Recipient: parksandpens
Pairing: Ravi/Hongbin
Rating: PG
Word Count: 8,865 words
Summary: Hongbin wants to date the boy at the retro mobile wash -- his red skymobile suffers for it.
Notes: thanks to J for being amazing and holding my hand the whole time!! and i hope you enjoy this and have had an amazing summer ♡

“Do you ever notice that kid that comes through?” )

*2015 summer exchange, pairing: ravi/hongbin

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oh my god oh my god oh my god parksandpens August 20 2015, 18:36:44 UTC
this is so cute holy fuck oh my god im legit crying this is adorable thank you so much. the characterization is great, i love the snippits of shit happening at the mobile wash office to break things up, the interactions between wonshik and hongbin are adorable omg, and the au in general is just really cool and creative!! and the ending. oh my god the ending its so cute i love you thank you so so much holy fuck <3333333

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RE: oh my god oh my god oh my god citrus_sarang August 31 2015, 05:37:36 UTC
aAHHHH i'm really glad you liked this!!! this prompt was so cute and i'm glad i went with the futuristic element hehe
thank you so much i'm so happy you liked it!!! <333333

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dev_earl August 22 2015, 16:12:53 UTC
I'm completely in love with this! Your setting and characterization were so on point. I can hear Sanghyuk's voice in your dialogues so clearly it's almost scary haha. You nailed Rabin's voices too, their interactions were all so cute. I adored their fumbles and ~flirting~ and the ending was just lovely.

Thank you for an amazing read! :)

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citrus_sarang August 31 2015, 05:47:33 UTC
thanks!! i try hard to bring out their rl!stuff so i'm really happy that came across!!!! \^^/
thank you for leaving such a nice comment!! <33

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citrus_sarang August 31 2015, 06:03:48 UTC
i'm screaming too!!!! thank you so much omg o<-<
i tried to make their personalities come through as much as possible so i'm glad that came across!! thanks for reading and leaving such a nice comment >< eeee <33333

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androidmin September 3 2015, 14:18:48 UTC
this comment is super duper late but i absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVED this fic
it was so cute and i adore rabin so so much and hongbin trying so hard and ravi omg ;;; hyuk and everyone else too!!
i also love the setting and the entire concept thank you for writing!!!!

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