but where do i begin?? firstly, thank you so much for choosing my favorite prompt! i also adore the fantastical twist you put on it; i wasn't expecting it at all but it was wonderful (and horror! you also mixed in some horror!)
this entire story was gripping, and i like how you wove in their relationship as you advanced the plot (also, minhyuk i see you there). taekwoon's denial over his love for hakyeon is spot on, and you managed to draw out more and more of his character as the mystery unraveled itself. speaking of mysteries, there were so many of them (taekwoon's past, hakyeon's past, the creepy house, the psycho mom) and every new reveal seemed to lead to another question. i'm glad it ended on a positive note, and yes, hakyeon don't you dare leave taekwoon again ;A;
Whatever the future awaiting him is, he's ready to face it. He knows Taekwoon will be there waiting for him. <--- let me cry over this for another minute
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this is such a good story! the suspense and plot-building are extremely well-done, and the world is very engaging. i loved the way you weaved information about their history, the world, and taekwoon's feelings into the story. and their relationship felt so painfully real - you managed to write an angsty fluffy first love/later love that blended effortlessly with the suspense fantasy story of the curse, the pendant, and the magical dying forest. a wonderful read, thank you!
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this entire story was gripping, and i like how you wove in their relationship as you advanced the plot (also, minhyuk i see you there). taekwoon's denial over his love for hakyeon is spot on, and you managed to draw out more and more of his character as the mystery unraveled itself. speaking of mysteries, there were so many of them (taekwoon's past, hakyeon's past, the creepy house, the psycho mom) and every new reveal seemed to lead to another question. i'm glad it ended on a positive note, and yes, hakyeon don't you dare leave taekwoon again ;A;
Whatever the future awaiting him is, he's ready to face it. He knows Taekwoon will be there waiting for him. <--- let me cry over this for another minute ( ... )
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a wonderful read, thank you!
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Hakyeon's Mom is psychotic...wow
Hakyeon is right...no matter how the future changed you can just find Takewoon again because you had all that love together before
So the ghost...is the daughter holding a grudge
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