lie on top of my heart like a butterfly for dev_earl

Aug 26, 2015 20:51

Title: lie on top of my heart like a butterfly
Recipient: dev_earl
Pairing: Ken/Hongbin
Rating: R
Wordcount: 2k
Summary: Jaehwan and Hongbin are supposed to be unpacking. They're not.
Notes: this is my first time writing kenbin, so i can only hope i got them right. i ended up mixing two of the prompts a little, i'm sorry if you wanted something more plotty ( Read more... )

pairing: ken/hongbin, *2015 summer exchange

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naegastar August 27 2015, 03:25:21 UTC
Ah what a lovely read ♥

I love domestic aus and this read so realistically - the feeling of just wanting to ignore all the boxes after finally moving, the way they're comfortable being silent together, Jaehwan overcome by Hongbin's beauty with the sunset in the background I just...;w; And then how they went from kissing to a blowjob, the entire moment felt so intimate and perfect and I absolutely loved that little wrench in their plans at the end xD Super cute and sweet ♥

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dev_earl August 27 2015, 13:53:02 UTC
Okay. First; I apologize for the rambling I'm about to do.

Second; OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG ASKJFDKSFGH I love this so, so, so, so, so, so, so very much! You managed to balance the schmoop and the domesticity and the sex extremely well. It's like you know me and everything I like! ^^

Your Kenbin voices were on point, too, I thought. I love how they're so in awe of each other on top of the love and the friendship and that's what I adore the most about them. The ending was adorable and sort of sweet and perfect. ♥

I hope this won't be the last time you'll write Kenbin because I definitely want to read more from you~

Thank you ever so much for this wonderful fic. You made my week! :)

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rikli August 28 2015, 17:33:34 UTC
so cute!!
i love silly kenbin, silly and cute, "you're pretty" "no you're pretty" i love
the world definitely needs more kenbin, i encourage you to write more!

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