Friday Night

[forworse]

It couldn’t have been more than ten metres from the door to the hot tub. With muffled laughter the girls sprinted barefoot across the snow and scrambled into the steaming water. April sank down until the water reached her chin. Snowflakes landed on her head and melted, cold water trickling down her back. Mel unscrewed the lid from the wine

Comments

[howtheduck]

4 years later I am finally seeing this.

This is a nice setup. It mentions things familiar to those who know the comic strip well, and yet tells a story that would probably work for someone unfamiliar with it. The characters seem in character to me.

Well done.

[forworse]

Thank you - I'd forgotten I'd written this!