Tunnel Vision

[foshoklinky]

“Tunnel Vision” | Minhyuk/Kyung | ‘R’ | Warning: Naughty language n’ stuff

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A/N: I wrote this while talking to my sweet bab xglimpsex. She's a huge encouragement to me because she's a darling and an amazing writer. This isn't beta'd. I wrote it for fun. I've been into Minhyuk x Kyung for awhile now since they seem so gay for each other

Comments

[xglimpsex]

I'VE SCREAMED AT YOU ALREADY BUT OMFG BUT THIS BUT HOW BUT CUMBOMB IS SO
AND THIS IS SO
AND YOU ARE SO

ALL OF IT IS YES, GOOD.
I'LL TAKE IT ALL.

[foshoklinky]

-GIVES YOU ALL THE KISSES- I WUV U BBY

[blackheart_lies]

Amazing.
*throws love at you*

[foshoklinky]

-catches all your love- :D Thank you!

[re_lla]

“The first time always sucks,” Minhyuk states the matter-of-fact.

but i bet that yours with kyung will turn out very much perfect ;)
if you're lucky though /shrug/

XD

i really like the atmosphere and chemistry between them ~
eventhough their conversation was a bit ... weird to listen
but it was still hot and i would like to listen to them more than this and how thing gets better ;9
and i'm very sure i will enjoy listening to them ~ lol

thanks ! :3

[remplissant]

i really liked this fic! never enough minkyung (or whatever else you want to refer to them as) around :) ♥ i like how easy it is for them (irl and in this fic) to just... be friends? it's just precious and they can talk about their first times and minhyuk can inadvertently mention "oh yeah i like the dick!" and kyung's all "oh" for a moment before he tries to make up for all the horrible sex. sobs into my hands. idek what i'm talking about but i really did like this! i hope you'll write more?

(and sorry this is so late ;;)

♥

[foshoklinky]

; 0 ; Thank you so much~! I love haha "cumbomb" or MinKyung. ; - ; They're so shippable because they're so comfortable with each other irl

Ahhh! Thank you for commenting~ I'm definitely going to try and write more (it's just the matter of inspiration -sobs-) T W T

(That's okay~ ; v ; I'm happy you commented regardless)

[remplissant]

ah, cumbomb!i've heard of them referred to as that (and i can't help but to smile sobs ;~~~;) i love that they basically ship themselves, too! they're super comfortable and close with one another and i think that really translates well in your fic above! ♥

i will send you good writing vibes and all the inspiration via brain waves! cries. i forgot to mention is in my earlier comment, but i really liked the details of each of their first times and the differences between them as well! minhyuk's especially so ;_; how he craved the feeling of it and how the experience didn't feel right to him at all ;_; this line: all Minhyuk remembers about the ordeal was pathetically trying to think it was hot i liked that he was trying to force himself into enjoying it

you're welcome! it was really deserving of a comment :> i had it in my bookmarked links :( i need to go back and catch up on lots of fics missed commenting on recently ;_;

[foshoklinky]

People are always shocked because they never heard of them called that. I think it's the best name for them tbh > v >

T~~~~T -basks in the writing vibes- Thank you~ sobs ;____; I wanted to make their first times awkward because I feel like everyone over-glorifies sex/first-time (in the fanfic community haha). I tried making it "dysfunctional" between the two of their stories, so it could be realistic and something that they could bond over haha. ;____;

T____T That makes me really happy. (Whoop here it is) OTL I actually really admire your writing, so this is like ahhhh thank you hahaha -creeps- :( There are so many good fics but so little time to comment. I know that feel.

[remplissant]

it's a very good name for them! i usually refer to them as the married couple with my friends on twitter lol :3

you're welcome!!! i agree; first times are always written out really well, and i mean, that's cool... but no one's ever good the first time ;~~~; because you're not used to your own body and someone else's yet! so i'm really happy (/broken record) that you did it this way c: and omg! i was not expecting you to really know of my writing ;; since i'm not very prolific or anything, but thank you so much! (we can creep on each other. a mutual relationship of creeping, you and i! lol)

[foshoklinky]

You're actually one of my favorite Block B writers. (Wow, I just keep getting more creepy. ;__; gomen senpai)

(Treat me kindly and may we have a wonderful relationship of creeping on each other (◕△◕✿))
(I'm Lauren btw harhar)