"intrepid", jon/tom. pg-13?

Sep 10, 2008 00:43

so this is the first thing i've posted, fic-wise in what...two years? yeah. kind of intimidating, but whatever. feature one jonathan walker and also, a tom conrad.

Sometimes he gets lost in Jon's...in Jon. )

fic: jon/tom

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sweetrecovery September 11 2008, 02:33:30 UTC
This was gorgeous. Nnnnngh, this: Tom, whose tongue is branding its shape on the sensitivity of Jon's skin

I'm just disappointed it's not longer!

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fourmeansfive September 11 2008, 02:44:25 UTC
I know. I kind of hate reading things of this length, but I haven't written in so long and I guess I sort of feel like if I had added more, it would have made it...idk. not as good.

ahh rambling, as usual. thank you very much. :)

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sweetrecovery September 11 2008, 02:45:37 UTC
I think it's good to get back into writing by writing drabbles, testing the waters a bit and working your way up to writing something longer.

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panic_4_me_baby September 11 2008, 03:19:14 UTC
This was really beautifully written. Tom's never seen Jon like this. Not naked, but bare. Yeahhh. I'm glad you're getting back into writing if it means we can see more like this. =)

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fourmeansfive September 11 2008, 15:49:04 UTC
oh, thank you. haha it's really weird getting comments again but very encouraging too. :)

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novalinedy September 11 2008, 15:18:34 UTC
This was really good, I liked it!

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fourmeansfive September 11 2008, 15:49:22 UTC
thanks!

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newyorkangst September 11 2008, 22:24:01 UTC
Maybe I'm biased because Jon/Tom kind of own my heart but you already had me at that first line. Completely enrapturing and lovely.
Great job :)

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fourmeansfive September 11 2008, 22:33:42 UTC
yes, yes, yes. I really don't understand why more people don't write more of this pairing. it begs and pleads for it.

thank you :]

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bkm5191 September 15 2008, 02:30:57 UTC
this is gorgeous. I love how they know each other, but they don't know this, and it's freaking them out a bit.

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fourmeansfive September 15 2008, 03:32:05 UTC
thaaank you so much. :)

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