"Addict", Fic: House M.D.

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Title: Addict
Rating: R
Prompts/Pairings: Allison Cameron/Remy Hadley [Thirteen]
Spoilers/Warnings: None
Summary: This is going so fast- too fast- and that frightens her more than anything.
Disclaimer: Not mine, not real, no profit made.
Author's Note: A short piece posted over at housefemslash.

Comments

[infinitlight]

This is ten.kinds.of.awesome.

So spare and achingly sad, hot and sweet and heartbreaking all at once (all of my favorite things!). There's not a word out of place, and every word is just right. I could quote favorite lines, but tbh I'd be quoting the whole thing. Okay, just one:

Late at night when she needs proof that they can never work, Remy turns to Cameron and Chase's self-induced falling together. It brings her down to earth when things gets carried away.

I also love:

She pauses to slip in an 'oh God'

Absolutely gorgeous, and it all feels *true*.

The characterization is dead-on and your Thirteen 'voice' is awesome. Thanks so much for a wonderful read. I am truly impressed.

Better late than never.

[annechonps]

I'm speechless. Really impressed by your way of describing Thirteen, the way she feels and the actions in the story. It's so *good*. Like infinitlight said, it feels real, true, and this is hard. Congratulations, really, and thank you for writing!