FIC: Audrey Hepburn Gets the Clues (Fandom: Veronica Mars)

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Audrey Hepburn Gets the Clues
by Shaye

SUMMARY: Why did these 09'ers insist on inflicting their angst on her, anyway?

DISCLAIMER: Rob Thomas is one crazy bastard. I like that in a man.

RATING: PG-13

SPOILERS: Through 2.22

NOTES: Written for Kath (whom I assume is crankygrrl) in the Thelma & Louise Do Outer Space Gal-Pal Ficathon. Thanks to Thea

Comments

[vonniek]

Yay! Veronica and Gia and Mac bonding!

This is really great, shaye. You've got the distinct rhythm of the VM dialog down cold, and I really, really love your Gia, who's affected by the events of the season finale in such a Gia-way (the MySpace friends count drop! What a Gia thing to say!), and sad and still kind of perky and totally endearing. And you noticed Gia matches her outfit to her thank-you pastry! Seriously, how can you not like this girl? Heh.

I also have a large love for your title. And! Paintballs!

[neonhummingbird]

Oh, this is adorable. All of the voices are right on the money (I particularly was hit by Veronica's reaction when Gia indavertantly compares Woody to Keith), and the dialogue was vintage Marsian (particularly the final exchange between Veronica and Keith). Very good dynamics between all the charatcers; it felt like I was watching this play out on screen, in the best possible way.

[ch1pper]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Gia just worms her way into your heart I tell you. I was all prepared to be "dumb fluff" but she is just too cute! The MySpace thing was classic!

Everyone was spot on.

Love this. You made my procrastination all the better.

[fialka]

Okay, I'd post the lines I loved, but then I'd need a cut-tag for length.

I do think heart-attack-in-a-bowl was my favourite though. Mmm, Rocky Road. I don't even think we *have* that over here and now I'm jonesing so bad...for both, VM and ice cream. Preferably together. I *hate* hiatus season (counts days till the Ben & Claudia Show, I mean SG-1, starts up again).

But really, fantastic story, just every character spot-on. So this is what I miss when I lose track of the flist for even one day. Glad you poked about it.

Hmm. Keep this up and I'll need a VM icon just for comments. Till then you get my favourite slashpairing. And my first.

[cofax7]

Aww, that's just fab, with the paint balls and the A/C and the faxing and the Mac needing a twin sister.

Awesome!