In The Garden - Topic 1 - LAST CHANCE IDOL

[fourth_horseman]

In the garden

Comments

[itsjustc]

I think this imagery works well.

[fourth_horseman]

thank you

[halfshellvenus]

He appears, foot weary and hand heavy
Crowned with moon and sun, wreathed in stars
The mantle of the harvest
I liked this part best. The language is strongly poetic, and both mythical and mired in the mortal world at once.

[fourth_horseman]

yes

thank you

[muchtooarrogant]

Very nicely done, with lovely images. I particularly liked the line, "Sense the brush of wing and flame"

Dan

[fourth_horseman]

thank you

[alycewilson]

I like the mythological feel of this poem. In a way, you and my son, KFP_Rawr, both wrote about the cyclical nature of life.

[fourth_horseman]

thank you