Comments | fowl100: The (Ominous) Claw (of Destiny)

linwenilid in fowl100

The (Ominous) Claw (of Destiny)

Jun 02, 2006 17:57

IMPORTANT: In case you're wondering, I lifted the 'one-hundred words or DEATH!' rule, so if you want to extend your story a bit more (without making it an epic though if you make an epic out of it, please share! ), you're free to do it. :) Also, I apologise to everyone who joined this comm expecting to read stuff, and instead, heard the tumbleweed ( Read more... )

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dim_aldebaran September 9 2006, 16:32:40 UTC

Interesting. Not 100 word or anything, but the humor was nice (though a bit more delicacy might be fitting). Good work. :)

linwenilid September 11 2006, 14:02:26 UTC

Hmm, more delicacy? What do you mean, exactly?

dim_aldebaran September 11 2006, 19:30:11 UTC

There was nothing really... subtle about it. The descriptions, the actions, they were all very laid out and blatant about what was happening and all. Mleh. I'm terrible at explaining what I mean. :P I don't mean, like, make it complicated and symbolic and all, or make it less simple, but just... let some things just stand as they are. Still not making sense. Grr. Sorry!

linwenilid September 11 2006, 19:43:41 UTC

Hmm, I sorta get it. Mine's a more direct approach than the one you're used to, maybe? I don't do much abstract; I prefer clear descriptions of actions and thoughts when I read (most of the time), so it must probably reflect in the way I write...

(does that make sense at all?)

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