Candy Woes [Alt]

Nov 12, 2011 05:31

Title: Candy Woes
Author: Fox
Word Count: 1,859
Characters: Lisa, Ben [8], & Dean
Summary: Lisa, Ben and Dean make a trip to the store and when Dad says no Ben throws a fit.
Warning: Spanking of child [obviously]
Disclaimer: Don’t own Supernatural or any of it’s characters.
AN: This is a spinoff [working off the same prompt but with different characters]  ( Read more... )

au, lisa, kid, daddy!dean, supernatural, spanking, dean spanks ben, dean, fox, hand

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lady_m_319 November 12 2011, 17:23:07 UTC
Great fic! Loved Ben's concern about getting one of Dad's warm ass specials. Loved when Dean prodded Lisa to know if they were almost done and said, ‘Cause you’re killin’ me and the kid here.' and then Ben piped up the same, 'Yeah, mom, you’re killin’ us!' Very cute. Loved the descriptive spanking and how you included why Dean at first didn't pull down the Superman, oh, Batman, (teehee) underpants. Loved the cuddles at the end and of course, the mention of Grandpa John's brush.

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foxfire90 November 12 2011, 21:05:19 UTC
Thank you!
Yeah if Dean was my dad I'd be a little worried about his ass warming specials...I'm just sayin'.

I don't think I'll ever get used to the idea of Dean being completely domesticated and leaving all his wit and cockiness behind, ya know?

Of course I had to throw in some John Winchester spanking implement ;)

-Fox

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atalantaj November 12 2011, 17:51:39 UTC
Good job on this. I liked Dean and Ben hating shopping and being bored out of their minds, that seemed so realistic, thought the bit about Lisa not being the disciplinarian was interesting and I liked how Dean was such a man of action. His son was acting up and he put an end to it right away, but wasn't too hard on the kid, which I liked. Thanks for sharing.

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foxfire90 November 12 2011, 21:00:23 UTC
Ah, thank you! I strive for realisticness!

Yes, even though I'm a chick I hate shopping so I fully understood the feeling Dean and Ben had goin'. Lol.

Thanks for reading & commenting!

-Fox

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