Proof Read? *puppy dog eyes*

[foxygrl10]

I'm still working on that annotated bibliography....I've got three of my sources paraphrased, which means I only have seven to go! Here is number three...I really appreciate any feedback you all can offer! <3

Comments

[caminatr]

"He argues that entertainment journalists do not ask any of the tough, important questions that the public wants to know, but rather questions that avoid making the celebrity feel uncomfortable and questions that help the celebrity to promote themself as marketable and favorable." is a run-on.

"The first being that Brown discusses the difference between news journalism and entertainment journalism, a line that is often blurred." Instead of a comma, I'd "--" it.

As usual, I like your writing style sweets.

[foxygrl10]

Thank you for reading hunny! I made the changes! As always, I appreciate the feedback!

xoxo