Red Sky At Night (Part 4)

[fraggledragon]

It's a long time dark, John thought as he lay in dark limbo unable to move, barely even breathing.

Is this death? he wondered, Am I dead?He could not hear a thing, and even though he was sure his eyes were open, he could see nothing. His body seemed to be held in nothingness. It was as if he was floating on an air current, though he felt no

Comments

[danceswithgary]

Interesting worldbuilding and great team fic! :-D

[fraggledragon]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! :D

[dernhelm62]

I too enjoyed the world you created along with the neat speaking patterns. The shep whump was great too! Not very often do we get a glimpse into the reactions of the team to John's death. If felt very raw and emotional. Very desrciptive. Thank you for a wonderful story! Please keep them coming!

[fraggledragon]

Thank you!! I am so glad I managed to pull off the emotion I was trying to convey! So glad you enjoyed it!

[roo1965]

what an interesting way to whump John,nasty critters and blood infection, seizures and seeing light differently. Nice team dynamics and planetlife and OFC's, very intense feel with Rodney trying to fix things to save John in time.

[fraggledragon]

Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it! team Sheppard all the way :D

[everybetty]

Cool whump idea! And you captured the Team hovering that I love so well. Nice job!

[fraggledragon]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it ! :D