The Scent and Sound of You 1/?

[fragil3thing]

Blaine Anderson was a happy kid. His parents loved him and they lived comfortably. Although he lost his sight when he was young, he never complained. For what he lacked in sight, he more than made up for in his heightened sense of sound; he was pretty gifted in music. He may not have been one of the popular kids, but he wasn’t the least bit envious

Comments

[mimiheart]

This is a good start. I'm interested to see where it's headed. Just an FYI, the walking stick is called a cane, at least in the U.S. I really like the premise though, and I look forward to more!

[fragil3thing]

haha. Thanks for the tip. I changed it to cane accordingly.

[mimiheart]

No problem. Sighted people make that mistake a lot, and blind people have to correct them all the time. ;)

[xo_oldgreggory]

Waaah, this is a really good start!
I am super excited to see where this goes :)

[fragil3thing]

thanks! your excitement is making me nervous... :)

[kk_wannabe]

Aww I love it. I have a softspot for blind!klaine as well.

I hope you don't mind some criticism, but the constant changing from past to present change confused me.

[fragil3thing]

I don't mind criticism at all. In fact I need a beta reader. I changed the present tense that you mentioned. But I'm still unsure whether I corrected everything. Thanks for the input. :)

[starkid_gleek]

really good start (: I can't wait till you update again! :D

[blue_eyed_shaz]

YES YES YES! A thousand times yes.

[fragil3thing]

:) thanks for the enthusiasm.