Fic: I Drive Alone

[fragileday]

Title: I Drive Alone
Pairing: Nakamaru Yuichi/Masuda Takahisa (Horikita Maki/Kuroki Meisa and a series of other minors and implied pairings)
Summary: AU- Nakamaru is on a journey to find the man next door.
Rating: nc-17- sex, slash and femmeslash
Disclaimer: Owning no one. =)
A/N: Stole a couple ideas from Hedwig and the Angry Inch. This is a

Comments

[speckled_writer]

W-wow!

I ♥ NakaMassu
And I'm so proud of Maru for achieving a random threesome moment.

[fragileday]

Awww, I think he definitely deserves one. =)

Thank you!

[ryogrande]

Omgomgomg I promise you a comment of flail quotes later but I just have to tell you now, while I am at work, on my phone, crying, so hard. I don't deserve this, I can't imagine why you would write all of this for me. It's so perfect, every word. Never leave me, tina, I love you forever.

epic comment pt 1

[ryogrande]

are you ready for this, because i am so ready for this and i can only imagine how many comments this is going to be.

FIRST OF ALL. NICHOLAS CAGE. OMGDED. i was at hollywood video today and saw his face on that dvd and thought of NAKACAGE PORN.

that first part, having read the whole thing now, i still don't see where it fits in. while he's on his journey to find massu? it's very nice, though, the descriptions and repetition and symbolism. or something. i like it even if i don't understand it. :D

his own roommate, Akanishi Jin

you had me from THIS LINE, NO SHIT. did you know i wrote them as roommates before? KORETTE DESTINY.

and yamapi and massu are roommates. i love it.

They were both equally awkward, stammering and blushing constantly.

<33333333333 I FORSEE A LOT OF 3S IN THIS COMMENT.

“Yamapi’s got a tie on the doorknob. He has a guest,”

ahaha ties for boys, scrunchies for girls! although somehow i think these boys would use scrunchies too. definitely jin. XD

yet they stood so close together that Maru could feel the

epic comment pt 2

[ryogrande]

Massu’s face turned slightly red. “Making love.”

idek what to say here, i just love this line.

he remembered that he was on the train and blinked down to see a small figure resting against him.

oh god this part. i was like WHAT THE FU-oh hi, ueda. so random and so very unexpected (kind of like this entire fic!!), but i do love me some maruda so it was a pleasant surprise!

MASSU'S VOICEMAIL. <3

“But why are you kissing me?”

“Because I’m drunk,”

drunk ueda's logic is only rivaled by jin's.

and no matter how much he didn’t want to be molested by a stranger, he didn’t want to make someone cry either.

only maru. XD

AND NOW WE HAVE KAMEDA. KAME WHO IGNORES HIS BABY'S NEEDS. DDDDDDDDD: KAME YOU ASS.

“I just need a little more affection,” Ueda finished with a sigh

~demo mou modorenai~

“Are you straight?”

“No. I mean yes. I mean- What?”

haha that's great. XD

A mischievous glint flickered in Ueda’s eyes as his hand trailed up his thigh, resting just beside the zipper of his jeans.dying, omg i never wanted maru to get molested

epic comment pt 3 omg

[ryogrande]

"We want you to have sex with us,” Maki replied bluntly

WELL THEN.

His jaw dropped. “I’m dreaming.”

“That would normally be the case,” Meisa ran her hand through her hair,

i love how meisa is such a bitch. LIKE YOU WOULD OTHERWISE BE HERE WITH MY FINE ASS. ahahaha

AND MARU TRIES TO TURN THEM DOWN. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THAT GETS YOU KICKED OUT OF THE BOYS' CLUB.

“He? You’re gay? Did I do that?”

ahahahahahaha i love how she automatically thinks it's her. AND IS A LITTLE PROUD OF IT. XD

“He’s kinda cute when he’s uncomfortable,” a hint of a smirk began to form over Meisa’s face.

i love how she's just like *latch* right here. like his uncomfortableness makes her feel manly, except without the penis. naturally, anyway.

We can have sex tonight and it will be purely physical,

maki's logic rates up there with drunk ueda and jin. XD

“You know, I always loved your hands,” she panted, lifting one of them up to her lips, lightly nipping at the fingertips.

ASLKDJASLKDSAJLSKA AND THIS IS WHERE I GET INCOHERENT.

“Stop putting yourself down

[c0rin]

WOW. WOW. WOW. WOW. I hope you don't mind if I add you. Clearly, I need to read all your fics!

[fragileday]

Gah, thank you! Although my fics are never locked, I'm always happy to make new friends!

[imifumei]

Oh my god, this is absolutely beautiful. Crys linked me to it and she was right, it's right up my alley. Wow, your writing is lovely. I love how you underplayed the relationships between everybody and let them speak for themselves without a lot of inner dialogue necessary. The mood is fantastic. It's. . .everything about it was lovely. I hope you don't mind if I read everything else you write.

This was amazing.

[elizajet]

The imagery and lyricism of this is beautiful. Every word seems like it was chosen very carefully. From the threesome (which was incredibly hot) to the romantic interludes where not many words needed to be exchanged, this was amazing.

I love how deliberate you are with your words, and all of the relationships were depicted beautifully and simply, which I loved.

Amazing, I really loved it.