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[frailty0fwords]

Here's a poem i wrote today... let me know what you think, leave me comments

Comments

[chrisfuckinshaw]

idyllic -- what the hell does that mean? are you making up words?

poetry

[anonymous]

It is my humble suggestion that you stop whining about how miserable you really are and do one of two things. A: You can get some serious medicle help or B: You can stop whining about how unhappy you are and about all that you are missing, and realize for once in your miserable life just how lucky you really are. You make me sick. You are not some unique snowflake, your are the same decaying organic matter as everyone and anything else. Your born, you grow old, you die. That is life, try not to live it acting even more miserable than you have to. Everyone has their troubles, no one wants to hear how lonely or depressed or miserable you are. GROW UP

Re: poetry

[frailty0fwords]

post n00dz. k thx.

Re: poetry

[murphyright]

fuck you ass whole. the girls just writing. if you got a problem with that just keep your mouth shut or don't read it. stop trying to feel better about yourself by putting down someone elses work. you're like a fucking child.

Re: poetry

[anonymous]

the funny thing is, immmm pretty sure shes quite happy right now. but cleeeearly, you cant write about someone being said and upset if you arent sad and upset yourself, god grow up lori wtf!?

also, n00dz plz.

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