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Smooth Move, Kent 2/?

Mar 29, 2009 14:05

Title: Smooth Move, Kent 2/?
Author: franlex
Rating: PG
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Clex
Words: 4.744
Summary: Clark has the worst timing... and then, maybe, not.
Warnings: This is a Work in Progress!
Author's notes: Beta'd by the lovely ctbn60. Thank you, darling!!

Part One

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part two, fic, smallville, smooth move kent, clex

Comments 13

samueljames March 29 2009, 19:39:15 UTC

Well that was an unexpected twist but I loved how you described Clark's fear and nervousness at the start.

Just one thing, think this maybe should be market not marked "Lex did have the marked cornered on head traumas." Sorry if I offend.

ctbn60 March 29 2009, 22:50:58 UTC

Oops. You are right. I missed that one. Thanks for pointing it out so she can fix it. :-)

franlex March 29 2009, 23:48:55 UTC

lol

I'm off to correct it!

:D

franlex March 29 2009, 23:46:36 UTC

It totally should be Market and not Marked! *blushes*

Thanks for pointing it out!! You don't offend at all!!

And, thanks for commenting!

:D

jlvsclrk March 29 2009, 20:19:07 UTC

I love Clark here: so charmingly clueless. He's so sweet when he's worrying about Lex's safety and it almost goes without saying he would find a way to sneak into Lex's rooms. Kinda heartbreaking that's he steeled his nerve to reveal the secret, only to find Lex has a healthy dose of amnesia. Not surprising given all that head trauma!

franlex March 29 2009, 23:52:51 UTC

Yeah, poor Clark. I'm been mean to him. He just got the courage to tell the truth and...

*Shakes head*

Thanks for reading and commenting, dear!

*GRIN*

eleni81 March 29 2009, 21:11:13 UTC

WOW!!! Now he's really done it, lol!!!

franlex March 29 2009, 23:54:19 UTC

You keep hitting me with this hot icon. Is giving me ideas, you know?

*giggles*

Yeah, Clark's really done it now!

Thanks for commenting, doll!

eleni81 March 30 2009, 09:54:16 UTC

You keep hitting me with this hot icon. Is giving me ideas, you know?
Mmmm....ideas like, Lex doing it to Clark? That would be hot to read *hint-hint-HINT*

I'm new to this community and I don't have any Clex icons to use yet!

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franlex March 29 2009, 23:56:11 UTC

No, there's no running away. Not when Lex Luthor is holding your hand, anyway (who could resist?)

Thanks for reading and commenting, dear!!

ctbn60 March 29 2009, 22:52:55 UTC

Good chapter. Clark is very sweet and caring here even so much so he gives into Poor Lex's pleading eyes. I do love it when Clark puts everyone else above himself. Even going as far as saying they are dating. This should prove interesting if it gets out. Especially with Clark's parents.

franlex March 29 2009, 23:58:07 UTC

Or Lionel. Can you imagine Lionel's reaction? *Chuckles*

I couldn't have done it with out you, darling!