For: greensilver, "Hot out here, cool me down"

Mar 31, 2008 12:11

Title: Hot out here, cool me down
Author: belmanoir
Recipient: greensilver
Pairing & Rating: Fraser/Vecchio, PG
Word count: 1,968
Summary: It's the middle of a heatwave, and Fraser thinks Ray would be more comfortable with an iced coffee.
Disclaimer: I don't own them...
Author's Notes: beta'd by china_shop, who fixed Vecchio and told me about the beneficial effects of hot tea ( Read more... )

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mrs_laugh_track April 1 2008, 04:25:21 UTC
Love it! This moment right here:

"Fraser, is there any chance you--" he croaked.

"Ray, I wonder if--"

Where they both realize in the same instant that ohmygod am I actually going to get what I've been wanting for so long and I can just picture them and it makes me smile in my heart. And the cherry syrup! For kissing! BOYS!

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belmanoir April 1 2008, 23:25:46 UTC
\o/ for heart-smiling! also fraser's love of cherry flavor makes me very happy.

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aingeal8c April 1 2008, 10:48:19 UTC
Hee hee that was hot ;-)

I love how they both suddenly realise the truth.

Oh boys!

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belmanoir April 1 2008, 23:26:22 UTC
BOYS! <3

thank you. :)

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nakeisha April 1 2008, 12:10:28 UTC
Very nice.

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belmanoir April 1 2008, 23:26:29 UTC
thanks!

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snoopypez April 2 2008, 02:19:26 UTC
OMG OMG OMG OMG

My heart is exploding with love.

What, are they trying to pretend we're in Paris? Because let me tell you something, Fraser, I've never been to Paris but I'm guessing the tables in the sidewalk cafés aren't hot enough to fry a five-egg omelet on!"
Aaaand I'm already in love. God, Ray. How are you SO AWESOME?

Inside is more backed up than Clark Street on game nights, because outside is hell on earth!
<3 <3 <3 <3

"Oh, dear," he said, looking at the stains, and started to put the jacket back on.
Oh, Fraser. I love you too. :D So very him.

Actually, it's very interesting--the tea warms the jugular artery as you swallow it, fooling the brain into thinking the body is overheating. The brain then--"
The brain then what?? I need to remember this for when it's insanely hot here. ;P

They were carrying the biggest iced coffees Ray had ever seen. Whipped cream, chocolate syrup, crushed ice, big domed plastic lids with straws poking out, the whole deal.
Mmmmm. Now I am craving iced mochas. THANKS.

"It's like air ( ... )

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belmanoir April 2 2008, 03:34:28 UTC
oh jaime, your feedback has made my life complete. thank you so much! <3 <3

i don't actually remember what the brain does. but it somehow flushes out your system and cools you down. you should google it, that's what i did after china_shop told me about it.

also fraser would totally cry if ray started having other friends. like a little baby cow.

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sdwolfpup April 2 2008, 16:46:28 UTC
OMGOMG. BOOOOYS. I was seriously, like, giggling and clapping at the end with the whole "do you know anyone who's queer" conversation. ♥

It's like air conditioning in your stomach

*dies* Oh Gardino. So awesome. Oh and this!

And Fraser was gonna be all understanding and supportive, and probably go to PFLAG meetings and read pamphlets

Heeee. The whole fic was made of win.

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belmanoir April 2 2008, 16:50:39 UTC
thank you!!! ::beams::

yes, i was so excited when i saw greensilver had requested gardino. badly-dressed-italian love!

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