Comments | fraser_vecchio: For Nakeisha: "Four TImes Ray Almost Proposed to Benny, and One Time He Did

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For Nakeisha: "Four TImes Ray Almost Proposed to Benny, and One Time He Did

Apr 01, 2008 18:42

Title: Four Times Ray Almost Proposed to Benny, and One Tme He Did
Author: Pixiecatfish
Recipient: nakeisha
Pairing & Rating: Fraser/Vecchio, R
Word count: 1,860
Summary: The best laid plans...
Disclaimer: I don't own them, but I love them.
Author's Notes: I have been wanting to write a "5 Times" story for a while now, and this gave me an excellent chance to do so ( Read more... )

Comments 18

nakeisha April 2 2008, 10:11:45 UTC

*Grabs you and hugs you*

::Coughs:: Sorry about that.

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

This is absolutely perfect. Everything I asked for - and more. It's just my type of thing to a tee. Romantic, loving, great dialogue and some wonderful touches of humour (love the bit where Ray tells Dief he's not going to be best man).

I really enjoy 'Five times stories' and this was an exceptional one - so thank you so very much.

I loved it - it quite made my week (which has thus far been awful).

Thank you again.

(Refrains from hugging).

pixiecatfish April 3 2008, 01:04:08 UTC

PHEW!! I'm so glad you liked it! It's always a little nervous-making when you write a story specifically for someone.

Your comments made me very happy. I hope your week continues to get better.

And hey- you can hug me all you want!!

nakeisha April 3 2008, 12:28:30 UTC

Oh, I did. I really did. And it is indeed - I said pretty much the same to my recipient.

Oh, good. I'm so glad - because it's a lovely story and I've duly saved it to my computer. And thank you.

Oh, good. In that case

*Hugs tightly*

sdwolfpup April 2 2008, 16:18:54 UTC

Oh that was entirely adorable! And this part made me choke on my breakfast I laughed so much: Benny stood up and slowly headed towards the gunman, no doubt ready to tell him an Inuit story, Ray let his head fall to the table. "I don't fucking believe this."

Oh, Ray. It worked out perfectly in the end!

pixiecatfish April 3 2008, 01:08:01 UTC

Oh that was entirely adorable!

Thank you!

And poor Ray. I'm glad that a Mountie isn't the only one who can get his man!

china_shop April 2 2008, 23:29:25 UTC

Hee! Thwarted at (nearly) every turn. This is wonderful! <3 <3 <3

pixiecatfish April 3 2008, 01:08:31 UTC

Thank you very kindly!

viciouscats April 26 2008, 19:03:04 UTC

Awww, lovely story!