Hold your breath, kid! [14/21]

[freaky4frankie]

Title: Hold your breath, kid! [14/21]
Author: Freaky4Frankie
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: R , swearing, sex, violence
POV: Gerard’s POV
Summary:They thought their childhood was destroyed, they thought they could never see each other again, they thought they could never be complete again. But oh how wrong they were.
Warning: Just keep reading XD
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Comments

[anonymous]

I've checked everydayy waiting for this, and it was so worth it :))
I'm glad Frankies ok ! x) Can't wait to see what happens next :)

[freaky4frankie]

awwww that is soo sweet thannk you, sorry it took so long i just had to write a story for english, i might put that on here who knows.

anyway your comments mean so much thank you <3

[lizaaytoxic]

Omg, that's so awesome!
he's back <3
yaaay, Frankie's back!
ooh please go on!!!

xx

[freaky4frankie]

yep he's back, did i startle you at the begining lol mwaahahaha
yeah i decied not to put a cliffhanger on this one and give ya guys a break, but you should of seen how the ending was originally, you would of went mad lol

[lizaaytoxic]

i would've probably just killed you 3;
and yeah... in the beginning i was like: SHIT! She Can't Be Serious!

oh and btw: i have first chap. of my Frerard online?
why are you never on msn anymore,?

[freaky4frankie]

haha lol, i'm evil like that haha

and cool i will read it :)
and it's cuz i have been really busy with revision and just done a story for school, might make it a frerard or something.

I will be on more if i can i just want to get this story done and be prepared for my exams :) sooo much fun :/ not

OH MY GOD!

[anonymous]

oh my god, this is amazing dude. one of the best frerard fics i've ever read. FUCK, HOW DO YOU DO THAT? i'm just writing one, but it's not very good, boring, we had it so many times..

really, i cried some chapters, either of sadness or of joy :D
FUCKING GOOD! FUCKING THE BEST! AMAZING! GORGEOUS! GREAT! AAAAAAAAAAH :D i cant find more words at the moment.
please, write some more. many many many many more.
cant wait til the next!
<3

Re: OH MY GOD!

[freaky4frankie]

ohhhh myy wow, i can't belive you think its that great i mean really, this is only my first and i didn't think it was that good.

awwwwwww thats the nicest comment i have ever got thank you sooooo much, its comments like these that want to make me carry on, thanks for taking the times to read and leave an amazing comment >.<

you really cried wow, thats just wow awww

aww you have just made me soooo happy, and i think you should do a ferard on here :)

and there will be more defo :D

Re: OH MY GOD!

[chrissichaos]

this is your first?! holy shit (: it was really good, believe me.

i was just so happy you wrote back, i didnt expected that :D
I have to say thank you for letting me read these amazing stories.
i really cant wait for the next part.

ah, maybe i'll put it here, but i'm not finished yet ^^ btw, where are you from?

Re: OH MY GOD!

[freaky4frankie]

awww thank you so much, your comments make me soo happy :)

no probs i'm just so thrilled that you like it, and soo happy you commented :)
i didn't think people would like it that much, cuz my summary is soo crap lol and being my first fic, i'm just kinda stuck on what to do lol

cool, you should they r fun to make, i have wrote like 3 others and i don't even know how to finish this one XD

and i'm from the uk, birmingham :) you?

[emo_girl26]

YAY!!! Frankie's back!!! i knew you wouldn't let me start to blubber, you won't dare or i shall never talk to again granny!!!

anyway i loooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeee it alot so keep updating or else i will come to your house and force you into updating.. and trust me i shall do it and you know i will....

love u xxx

[freaky4frankie]

awwww thanks scab!! that means a lot coming from you :D

and yeah i am doing my chapter tonight so keep your hair on, or you will turn bold after your dad XD and you don't want that now :)

and i love you too, my bit on the side :D

[freaky4frankie]

awwww thanks scab!! that means a lot coming from you :D

and yeah i am doing my chapter tonight so keep your hair on, or you will turn bold after your dad XD and you don't want that now :)

and i love you too, my bit on the side :D

[emo_girl26]

does it? awww sweet cute!!!

I WIL NOT BE BOLD LIKE MY DAD!!! SHUT UP WOMAN!!!!

yh love you too lezzie bezzie lol xxx

[reynoldssye]

Are you stopping it here or carrying on cause I think there should be more about Mikey and more about ray seeing as Ray hasnt been in it much, Just helping cause Me Need more cutey frerard!!!!! and obviously more about frank and G

[freaky4frankie]

awwww of course not, i am defo carrying on, just don't know how to end it lol
but yeah i am actuall writing my chapter 15 now, and am putting more of ray and mikey in it don't worry, it will get cuter and there will be more frerard momments :)

i was going to put bob in, but i never got round to doing it and now its to late cuz i'm nearly done with it, but anyway hope your liking it :)<3

[reynoldssye]

Yeah i'm loving it I just love the fanfics that make you go awwwwwww but thanks to this i'm all out of aww :P

[freaky4frankie]

awwwwww lol

i'm glad it makes you go awwww :)
and there might be more awwwww bits in it still to come :)
thanks for reading and comenting <3