Honey i'm home [slash one-shot]

[freaky4frankie]

Title: Honey I’m home [slash one-shot]
Author: Freaky4Frankie
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: NC-17
POV: Gerard’s POV
Summary: When I get home, I always know he will be waiting for me...to make brownies?
Beta: stabityanna911 Thank you again <3
Warning: very detailed sex and swearing.
Disclaimer: I own the characters and got them to obey my rules...cough...cough...not

Comments

[emo_girl26]

haha i knew you could do it!!! im proud of you!!! when you was talking on the phone you was like i dont know what to do but you did it baby!!! im proud of my little slut! i hope you wasn't thinking about me when you wrote this... getting a little horny esp. when you think of me right? haha anyway really good one shot, keep up the good work or else i will have to sit you down after our wedding and teach you the amazing ways of writing the best pervy slash ever!!! i learnt off the masters ages ago and i shall pass the secrets on to you choosen one!

anywa love ya loads xoxoxoxox

p.s. merry x-mas if i dont get to talk to you later, i will try and phone soon when ever, probably on x-mas day screaming down the phone about what i got for x-mas... my parents are getting me a laptop, i know my dad won't but i have a funny feeling he may want to be really annoying and buy my a pink laptop, i think i will die cuz its horrible colour!!! but i know he wont or i'll kill him... anyway love u xoxox

[freaky4frankie]

aww thank you baby, i know i felt like a slut after i wrote this lol

aww of course i was thinking of you when i did this, who else could i have been thinkin about ^^ hehe
ohhhh i would love for you to sit me down oohh lala XD lol
and thank you very much, i want to be able to get better, by your amazing teaching :)

aww thank you, i would have got back to you earlier but my internest connection went last night, so i only just got ya message, plus i have been soo hyped with what i have got today i didn't even think about coming on here :)
And merry x-mas also i hope you had a good day and everythink you wanted :D and what laptop did you get then ?
and love you too :) xxxx

[emo_girl26]

p.s. you forgot to say in the a/n that im your lover and we are getting married... how could you!!!!

[freaky4frankie]

sorry :( XD

[chrissichaos]

hahahah :D i understand you felt like a slut after writing this XD but its very good though. i just love the way you're describing :D
and its hard to concentrate on any other thing, thats y i said give me a few minutes xDD
i dont think its so easy to write a sex scene. so i think its really good (:

even if its a one shot, its a very good one. :D
thank you a thousand times.
<3

[freaky4frankie]

haha yeah lol, i'm not really sure i will be writing another slash lol i did do another one shot tho, i had like a writing spark at 3 am lol

anyway thank you, haha yeah i didn't really know what to do so i had to check out other people slash >.<

thank you :)

[freaky4frankie]

awww well thank you so much, i'm glad mine isn't that bad then >.<
it's my first and i did my best so thanks for reading and commenting :D

[stabityanna911]

uhm...I was reading this at work...which was a bad idea as you can imagine.
I love the plot and how descriptive you are, pretty talented stuff. I know I'm new to the Comm and you dont know me, and I really don't mean to disrespect in any way, but maybe having someone read over your work before posting it would make it even better? the little spelling and grammer mistakes create bumps in the wonderful work and its flow. Otherwise really great job.

[freaky4frankie]

haha lol i can imgaine haha i did that at school once and then i acidentally printed it out, so wasn't very good :/ lol
and thank you very much >.< well it's like my first slash so i wasn't really great with it but no that's fine :)i'm open to everyones opinions

and if you know any good beta's or anyone that will do it quick, please let me know :)

[stabityanna911]

I'm not very good grammar wise, but I'd be happy to be a second pair of eyes if you ever need them. I know exactly how you feel, i recently posted my first fic (in a while) too so i know where your coming from. Your realllyyy pretty amazing for your first fic...really girl, Jesus.

[freaky4frankie]

yeah well we all arn't great, it's just the frank&gerard community i really want to get it on, but my work needs more improving and i really don't know what bits do.
Aww thank you that would be great help if you don't mind, how would you like me to send it to you?

>.< aw haha again, thanks so much :)