Hold your breath, kid! [18/20]
Title: Hold your breath, kid! [18/20]
Author: Freaky4Frankie
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: 15 mild language and intimate scenes.
POV: Still Gerard’s POV
Summary:They thought their childhood was destroyed, they thought they could never see each other again, they thought they could never be complete again. But oh how wrong they were.
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Author: Freaky4Frankie
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: 15 mild language and intimate scenes.
POV: Still Gerard’s POV
Summary:They thought their childhood was destroyed, they thought they could never see each other again, they thought they could never be complete again. But oh how wrong they were.
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Great chapter thoughh :D Frank getting protective over gerard was so awesome :))
Can't wait till the next! XD
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thanks for commenting :)
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:))
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it even rhymes (:
this is so fucking gorgeous, coz ((:
fucking amaaaaaazing : D
really, i'm serious. this story is just awesome!
i love it when they ran away from this guy (: and then broke out into laughter. and the thing that gerard is really concerned about frank when he's not around is just so fucking CUTE (:
it's also marvelous when they're at home and make out and stuff, really i again love the whole idea :D
i'm sooooo fucking curiously about who this guy is and what'll happen to them : S ? i hope nothing too bad, but a lil bit action is allowed otherwise it'd be boring :DD
i'm looking forward to the next chapter (:
i want to read it right now sooooo baaaaaaaaaad XD
please, please, please continue and post the new chapter ASAP :DD
i really can't wait
and can't find the words to describe this chapter again (:
every chapter you write is fucking awesome :D
thanks for everything.
thank you a thousand times, coz (:
<3<3<3
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reaally i am so honoured that you love my story so much, it makes me soo happy and i really love you for it >.<
by the way, where the hell does it ryhm? i dont remember making it ryhm haha XD
man i really don't know what to say, you always leave me feeling over the moon hehe.
just thank you soo much, and lol i wish i could just post it now haha i'm just really nervouse on how to do it, i really want the ending to be spcial and not just about them gettting horny and all, it be love and passhionate you know >.<
so i dont wanna fuck it up
No thank you a million billion times for your apreciathion towards my writing and story, and for just reading and commenting with that much enthuseasm :):)
your sooo nice thank you thank you thank you <3 :)
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noo i didnt mean your story rhymes, i meant this:
oh man
and you managed it again :D
THIS rhymes xDD
aaaw thank you (: haha, yes i can understand you, but please, try to post it ASAP. i would be soooo happy : D
aaaaaaaaaawiiieeeeee thanks dude (: thats really nice.
well, i have to comment it with so much enthusiasm when it's so fucking AWESOME, haven't i?
thank you for posting this. i check every single day if a new chapter is there, and when you (finally xDD) posted a new one, my heart gives a flip and i sit there staring and grinning stupidly at the computer. and then i make myself comfortable to read the story (turning on good music, eating chocolate, drinking a tea). this makes reading perfect (:
my mom always asks me why i lauh so much when i'm sitting at the computer, and i just say: 'coz' XDDD
she knows you as well now ^^
thanks for writing those stories
<3<3<3
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sorry :/ i am soo slow, and i also have about 5 months left of school and i want to pass everythink :) tho i have just been playing rock band for hours and i swear i have loast a stone XD if thats possible XP
awww it really hasn't sunk in that you really think my story is awesome wow thank you soooooooooooooooooooooo much :):)
awwww man that is sooo sweet,i get like that when i reaaly liike a story, i make sure to get comfy and save it for when no one will bug me. But for you to think of that about mine is ubeliveable :O
hehe aww thanks your the best. I can't belive you have to live in a different country :/ cuz your soo cool and nice. could you possibly move to england........^^
XD
oh you are sooo welcome and thank you, i wouldn't be if no one bothered to take intreste in them. More stories to come, might do a frikey >.< dunno ( ... )
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Otherwise I like it.
Poor Gee getting a more or less panic attack at the café. I would have had let Frankie pay for it though. ;)
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well i miss my cliffhangers hehe
i know haha i though i would scare him a lil, tho frankie is to cute to get mad at >.
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That's Frankies damn luck and that Gee is totally head over heals for him. *lol*
Only 2 more chapters and it's over. I can't believe that. Makes me a bit sad tbh.
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yep tho c'mon who woudn't be head over heals for him, even my mom thinks his hot XD
tho she likes all the guys i like from the bands i'm into, apart from pete wentz and green day, tho billi joe is cute in his won way >.< okay... going off topic XD
haha i know, i'm happy lol cuz i havn't even read it myelf, i want to know if its all that good and improve with my next stories :)
i don't even know where i'm going with it :/ hehe
and i will do other frerards, frikey's and stuff that you will hopefully like (fingers crossed) :)
will try and do it ASAP >.< thank you soo much for reading and commenting :D
it means a lot
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that means a lot that you have read and commented i'm really glad you enjoyed it, thats really made my day >.<
awww thats soo sweet hehe i cannot belive i did that to you hehe, wow i dont even know where the hell i'm heading with this story lol
and i would never make frankie die, :( that would be too sad defo on my first story.
haha lol i do that sometimes awww thank you, i wanted to mix some school bits in it too, and i have completely forgotten about the 'friend' lol and probs half of the stuff i wrote XXD
hahha alll i can say is thank you soooooooooo much, i reallly love it when i get comments, and when they are as awesome as yours that just puts a big goofy smile on my face :) haha
it's okay lol i write loads too hehe i will post as sooo as i can :D
thanks again :)
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I can't wait to read the next chapter.XD
Post it sooon,pleaaase?
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and i will, i did some on my phone cuz we had a cover and they didn't know where are work was typical ehh :/ so yeah i will post it soon x <3
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