Gracia (Subtitle: Blame It On The Drinks) -- Hughes x Fuery

[freaky_zero]

Title: Gracia (Subtitle: Blame It On The Drinks)
Author: freaky_zeroGenre: Angst/Smut/Angsty smut

Comments

[carnimirie]

Poor Fuery, so it ended up being a one-night stand after all. *pats Kain on the head* well, if he's lucky, in the future he may get Havoc? *immediately concocts a happy eventual ending for Fuery* still, interesting. If I had to do this pairing I would have been utterly lost- you made it work quite nicely, I thought. I especially liked the part when they were talking in the bar. That scene and the part when Kain asks Maes for this to be more than some one-night thing were both really powerful to me. Overall, I really like this story! <3

[freaky_zero]

Blushing! You're making me blush! *attacks with glomps and huggles and kisses*

Yeah, I feel really bad for poor Fuery >.>; He gets to go back to the office heart broken and, and...*sniffs* But, yeah, sure, Havo'll totes comfort him. *waggles eyebrows*

Anyway, I don't know, I'm still not happy with it? But...I'm really weird. I seem to think it could've been a lot more impacting. So I'm not really content =/

I AM GLAD YOU LIKED IT, THOUGH! ♥ ♥ ♥

[trinity_renee]

This is why I hate Gracia. I really do. But Fuery was so cute! I could just hugglesnuggle him!

[freaky_zero]

YAY~

But, really, was it Gracia's fault? *shifty eyes* And, ^^;, I'm glad you liked Fuery. =3 He'd be cute no matter what, I think.

[lmd_84]

Hate Gracia? Why so? If Gracia made a mistake here, Hughes made an even bigger on; being an opportunist drunken git! This fic was....entertaining, but I can't honestly say I *like* it very much. Won't stop me re-reading it, though!

[trinity_renee]

I hate most anime women. Most being the key word.

[okami_hu]

Mmm, my dirty pleasure OTP. XD Very nice, neatly executed, and the initial tragedy captured me somehow - I usually hate to see Fury getting hurt but oh, well. Variety is wonderful. ^__^ Good job.

[freaky_zero]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! =)

[summerhorse]

I LOVED this :) I could kick Maes in the head for leading for Fuery on like that though! AH, but he's hopeless for marriage.

I have to say I was wary at first, never having even pictured the two together, but it worked ;) Now I could totally see them working as a couple too for some reason. And I LOVE how Mustang kills several birds with one stone, lol.

Great writing and everyone was SO true to their characters :) *applauds*
Well done!
xoxo

[freaky_zero]

I don't believe you! =O

But, gosh, you make me squee so much ♥! Thank you! I'm glad you liked it~! I'm sorry I'm not remotely coherent!

&hearts

[hikaru_9]

That was all kinds of shiny! The pairing was great (w00t for the rare ones!!!) and the characterizations were wonderful! Loved Mustang! You made him so calculating and ruthless! Methinks i need to read more of your work...mm hm! The heartbreak too... poor Fuery, he's such a sweety!

[freaky_zero]

*blushes* Thanks so much! I was very worried about characterizations, but I seem to have done better than I thought. If you really want to read more, everything is in my memories, but I've only finished 4 FMA fics, including this one. (I'm an amazingly slow writer).

Still, I'm glad you liked this! =) ♥

[hikaru_9]

*is amazingly BAD writer*

So no problems there... i'm not one to judge on productivity levels anyways, i suck, and i know it! *ignores stack of drawings she needs to do to read more fics*

[freaky_zero]

But you're an spectacular artist, so it all evens out~! =D And you've gotten quite a lot more accomplished with your drawings in the past month than I have in the past year, lol.

But procrastination is fun ^^