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[freaky_zero]

Title: Damage Control
Author: freaky_zero
Genre: Smut?
Rating: Hard R
Pairing: ArcherxHavoc
Spoilers: Not...really?
Word Count: Approx. 2,200

Warnings & Notes: Formatting, beta'ing, and more in depth warnings (assuming I can find anything necessary of warnings) to come. Brrr...I had some serious issues with tense in this because I was doing two different

Comments

[the_raddy]

That was awesome, hon! %)

My only suggestion is to put some sort of break after the line "the blond shifted forward and took 'control' very firmly in hand." After that line it switches from Havoc's point of view to Archer's. You could just use some centered "******" or something, just so that the reader knows they're about to switch to something different from what they were just reading.

Other than that, fabulous job! Secret blowjobs = greatest thing ever.

[freaky_zero]

Done! Yeah, I was writing in the wee hours of the morning. So I guess I didn't really think about the transition. Thanks for pointing it out.

And thank you, thank you, thank you for commenting. No comments tend to make me emo. D=

I'm glad you liked it. Have you gotten to watch the series yet? XD

My god, why do I still not have your things sent?!?!

[cornerofmadness]

Neat. I loved Havoc's thoughts in this