Not Alone - AU

Oct 21, 2012 18:56

Title:  Not Alone - 2/6
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nando, football rps, dan

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gingermad October 21 2012, 19:19:57 UTC
let in the love inside of you Fernando! don't escape!

Dan ... oh baby ... you are so hot!

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jumping_down October 21 2012, 19:27:56 UTC
OMIGOODDDD I just checked this page to see if there was an update AND HERE IT IS! But I have to go now, dammit. I'll be reading this the moment that I have a second of free time!

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jumping_down October 27 2012, 07:40:43 UTC
Awww. When. They were having drinks, half the time I wanted to cry, the other half I wanted to smile when they started getting along. Great story, love the tension, love their progress towards getting better. :)

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niezapominajk October 21 2012, 20:56:40 UTC
Quick comment from me, because writing on my phone is killing me ;) I love the emotions in Fernando, how he's falling for Dan, and how the Dane opens up for him. It's always good to read about Nick :) Besides I really want a tattoo myself, so you totally bougt me ;) lots of inspirations ;*

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rayziz October 21 2012, 21:20:50 UTC
This is great!!! I just read the two chapters and there are FOUR more..JOY
Fernando at the end though ♥ ..just let it out already boy!
I love this, and I can picture everything so clearly. And dan was amazing at opening up.
and for the first time ever, I accept Nick's inclusion in this story. He served his purpose.
MORE!!!

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tetila October 21 2012, 22:17:47 UTC
Butting in to say, your enthusiasm made me smile :D but I agree it's a great story!

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thopix October 22 2012, 09:19:01 UTC
OMG!! That was just good!They've a great chemistry. I'm really caught in the story and I can't wait to next part. Update soon please!!

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