Not Alone - AU

Oct 29, 2012 20:02

Title:  Not Alone - 3/6
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nando, football rps, dan

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niezapominajk October 29 2012, 20:03:42 UTC
Beautiful, I love their emotions. The picture of Dan and Nando dancing was cute. I always enjoy watching flamenco and these two... I'd like to see that ^^ beautifuly writen chapter :)

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gingermad October 29 2012, 20:32:32 UTC
I remained with parted lips like a fool waiting for they kissed under the house of Fernando! ahahahhahaha
it was so exciting!
Cadiz ... oh my god!
please ... just tell me that this is not a story that ends sadly!
I love you!

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thopix October 30 2012, 20:58:15 UTC
This chapter was amazing. You made me smile all long it. I was hoping for something to happen after the dance session but this trip sounds really promising :D And Cadiz is so wonderful, the perfect place for magic moments.Can't wait for more.

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jumping_down October 31 2012, 22:32:12 UTC
So excited to read this! I'll be out of town for a few days, but this is on the top of my to-do list when I get back!

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little59mermaid November 4 2012, 21:25:05 UTC
So far my favourite chapter :)
Love the small gestures. Those are the ones that show true feelings... I'm sucker for angst these days, so I absolutely adore Dan being uncertain and all, it's kind of cute I think. And I like that they've been taking things slow so far... Even though, at the same time, I can relate to Dan wanting to know what would the rest of Fernando's response have been.
he doesn’t want to put a name to any of it, just likes that it makes him feel awake and aware of exactly where his heart is beating in his chest. ♥

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