Oh my.. This is so beautifully written ' and that song is amazing!! It really sucks that they were in such a bad place when it first started, it kinda hurt to see(read) them like that *sigh* But i'm thrilled they found each other, and are trying to make each other happy :) That is what makes it so damn beautiful. And that last kiss? Made my heart swell, they're so wonderfully perfect together <3 Can't wait to read moree!!!
This is just wonderful. The kiss and the whole skinny-dipping scene were so adorable. And I love that they’re not acting as if it was a big deal, I mean the kiss and stuff. Seems like they’re comfortable with each other and that’s how it should be, right?
I can’t help it but I feel like quoting a few of my favourite bits :) it's just about the best smell in the world Yes, 100% agree. Maybe it’s just that I live inland, so it’s quite rare for me, but I totally love the smell of the sea...
"We can be anything, here. Nobody cares. Two strangers for a few days." Oh yeah, I love them being reckless, just enjoying themselves in the sun, or rather moonlight? ... ;) Can they be like this forever? :)
come shower with me As I pointed out in my previous comment, I actually like that they’ve been taking things slow, but part of me wanted Dan to say it out loud :)
It seems that in this whole thing, this friendship, relationship, whatever the hell it is, Fernando is the one taking steps forward. Well, yes. Maybe it’s time for Dan to make the
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I'm with Fernando here, can't wait for naked Dan :P
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They're so natural and sweet it makes my heart melt!
Really nice chapter, dear :)
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It really sucks that they were in such a bad place when it first started, it kinda hurt to see(read) them like that *sigh*
But i'm thrilled they found each other, and are trying to make each other happy :) That is what makes it so damn beautiful.
And that last kiss? Made my heart swell, they're so wonderfully perfect together <3
Can't wait to read moree!!!
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The kiss and the whole skinny-dipping scene were so adorable. And I love that they’re not acting as if it was a big deal, I mean the kiss and stuff. Seems like they’re comfortable with each other and that’s how it should be, right?
I can’t help it but I feel like quoting a few of my favourite bits :)
it's just about the best smell in the world Yes, 100% agree. Maybe it’s just that I live inland, so it’s quite rare for me, but I totally love the smell of the sea...
"We can be anything, here. Nobody cares. Two strangers for a few days." Oh yeah, I love them being reckless, just enjoying themselves in the sun, or rather moonlight? ... ;) Can they be like this forever? :)
come shower with me As I pointed out in my previous comment, I actually like that they’ve been taking things slow, but part of me wanted Dan to say it out loud :)
It seems that in this whole thing, this friendship, relationship, whatever the hell it is, Fernando is the one taking steps forward. Well, yes. Maybe it’s time for Dan to make the ( ... )
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