It's a given that this part is hot hot hot, but it's oh so beautifully written too. As a writer, I am jealous.
Their mouths are still firmly attached, tongues entwining lazily, more slowly now. He wants to sift through exactly what Dan tastes like, put a name to every layer to sort into his memories, even though he hopes he'll get more (infinite) chances to relearn them all. Finally Dan pulls back, thumb stroking the curve of Fernando's right hipbone, eyes holding a beautiful wreck of lust and happiness and insecurity, and Fernando doesn't want to use words as reassurance anymore; he wants to use his hands and lips and tongue until Dan knows that he's perfect, that this is perfect. They look at each other for a few moments, and Fernando just takes in how the moonlight highlights the side of Dan's face, freckles dotting his skin, and Fernando wants to count them and memorise each one, make a map in his head so he'll always find his way back.
That's like paragraph after paragraph of perfection.
I love this fic so f... much!!! Is just so perfect. I loved that they take their time to get into the relationship. It shows how much both care because they want it to be something strong and lasting. Looking forward to the next chapter. But sad because it will be the last one.
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Both parts are so beautifully written!! (the sex scene was hot!)
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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Their mouths are still firmly attached, tongues entwining lazily, more slowly now. He wants to sift through exactly what Dan tastes like, put a name to every layer to sort into his memories, even though he hopes he'll get more (infinite) chances to relearn them all.
Finally Dan pulls back, thumb stroking the curve of Fernando's right hipbone, eyes holding a beautiful wreck of lust and happiness and insecurity, and Fernando doesn't want to use words as reassurance anymore; he wants to use his hands and lips and tongue until Dan knows that he's perfect, that this is perfect.
They look at each other for a few moments, and Fernando just takes in how the moonlight highlights the side of Dan's face, freckles dotting his skin, and Fernando wants to count them and memorise each one, make a map in his head so he'll always find his way back.
That's like paragraph after paragraph of perfection.
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Beautiful like always :)
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