[FIC] Debauched (Lotrips, OB/SB)

[freedomfry]

Title: Debauched
Pairing: OB/SB
Rating: Eh, let's say R, what with the cursing and the boy-on-boy action.
Summary: Come on. After this story? The challenge to fill in the blanks was just hanging out there like a big slow-pitch softball.
Disclaimer: So, so, so not true. Also, if you know me in RL, I never wrote this.
A/N: Thanks, as always, to my

Comments

[galor5]

awww I loved it!

That "debauched" night out on the town by the boys brought a huge smile to my face!

Thanks for reliving it for us!

[freedomfry]

Thank you!

[thalassatx]

*ROWR*

Hot and still very tender and wonderful.

[freedomfry]

Oh, thank you! This is my first foray into non-gen stories and I was very, very nervous.

[alliwantisanelf]

I love the way you fill in the blanks of things!

Please say you'll do it again sometime. I'm sure there will be lots of gaps in the reported events of Orlando's life that really need some fine reporting like this to keep them straight!

***hugs***

Love,

al

[freedomfry]

Hee! Yeah, the media keeps leaving out all the gay sex that's so obviously happening everywhere :)

And thank you for the lovely feedback!

[msilverstar]

This was your first slash story? It's great! I like your guys very much, they way they take the piss but also take care of each other. Nice crisp banter, and the pause where they decide if they want to sleep together is poignent and sweet. I'm allergic to melodrama and sentiment and like the way you avoid them here. More, please!

[freedomfry]

I've written Lotrips before, but only as buddy-fics. This was my first foray (in any fandom, actually) into the boy-on-boy action.

I'm also allergic to melodrama (no crying, please and thank you), so I tend not to write it.

Thanks for your comments!

[danbi]

I really liked the dialogue. This was a fun read. :)

[freedomfry]

Thank you! I love writing dialogue, and if other people think it sounds realistic, so much the better.

Thanks for the feedback!