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Jul 10, 2023 21:49

✪How's MY Driving?✪

-No Flaming
-Plotting Welcome
-Constructive Crit Only
-Anon On, IP Off, Screening Off

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thepeoplesay August 3 2009, 16:43:57 UTC
We like her.

Personally, a lot of Cissnei players fall into the 'mindless Shinra employee' route, or the 'hopelessly in love with Zack' one. Frankly, we adore that you haven't.

Your choice of taking her from the beginning is refreshing and very much a great one. She's still her loyal Shuriken-self. But with her mind and personality, without the conflict with her colleagues, its nice to see her adapt on her own rather than in line with CC.

You seem like a bright, active Cissnei, which is good. To be perfectly honest, we're mostly just saying 'good job' than offering any sort of crit ~ we like when we get to do this.

Keep it up.

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blueskyremix August 6 2009, 21:30:45 UTC
I am completely unfamiliar with this character, but I have stalked a few threads, and I must say--she and Roxas should meet, especially being cabinmates. It'd be interesting to see how they interact (they've talked once, but it wasn't for very long). I think he'd like her.

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furorimperator August 8 2009, 08:53:50 UTC
I love her. What else can I say. A lot, unfortunately.

But seriously. You have taken her from a somewhat difficult point in her canon, meaning that not much was known about her from then. Or at least, from what I've discovered. BUT! You write her very well. I can tell you definitely have her voice, and more over, you care about the character. That makes such a difference, to me anyway, but then I'm weird like that.

My only thing, and I know it's just me and my love of roundness in characterization, is that she's almost too much of a workaholic. But I know that's how Cissnei is, yet hopefully there's room for her to grow and relax just little here and work some of the Shin-Ra out of her. I'm having to do the same thing with Sephiroth, too, but it's easier for him, because he actually wants to get away from them, lol.

Still, wonderful job and I absolutely love interacting with her!

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prophetabove August 10 2009, 19:32:53 UTC
She's so.. perfectly in character it's such a treat! I love how she handled this guy. It greatly amused me, and I look forward to seeing her interact with more of her canonmates as well as branch off and handle a bunch of foreign characters (like this guy). She did it so smoothly, and so simple, it was wonderful.

I think you're doing her a great deal of justice, and thank you for sharing her!

you also make me want to bring my Tseng out to play.. Oh man, oh man ♥

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