What a beautiful and evocative story you've told here! I love the way you weave the past and present throughout, the emotional highs and lows of reality, and how you included Peter and Laura too. Simply lovely!
My favorite line: When Peter turned around to walk away, Will felt like for the first time in many years the silence felt more like victory than the broken pieces of a life not lived.
Thank you, Jen! It was a lot of fun writing it, too! It had been a long time since I'd written anything A/W then and I thoroughly enjoyed getting back into their minds.
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My favorite line: When Peter turned around to walk away, Will felt like for the first time in many years the silence felt more like victory than the broken pieces of a life not lived.
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One of my favorite lines, too. Thank you again!
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