Collision chapter 43

Jun 27, 2014 13:22

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Walking onto the field, taking in his surroundings and the atmosphere in the stadium, Luke consciously pushed back any thoughts of Reid and focused on the game.

83 minutes in and the score was still 0-0. Luke played a good game, sharp and fast. His direct opponent, and up-and-coming player whose attitude was as big as his talent, had been bugging ( Read more... )

fanfiction, atwt, luke/reid, :author|artist: fremi08

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vision_m June 27 2014, 13:57:20 UTC
That player was deliberate in his tackle and just down right piece of shit but this give Luke some personal time with Reid and just maybe they will be able to work out some way for them to be together this time around.

Amazing chapter

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dpracket June 27 2014, 17:29:11 UTC
Luke got gay bashed on the field. :(

But burdens are sometimes blessings, and LuRe can be together for awhile.

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kccalgal June 27 2014, 18:48:38 UTC
First of all I hope your surgery is a success and that you have a speedy recovery.

It is a rough sport. I'm surprised they all haven't suffered broken ankles and torn knees. They have a reputation for flopping but slow motion usually proves otherwise. You elude that the opponent intentionally took Luke out but I will save my opinion for the instant replay. I suspect the harassment on the field is a typical method used to gain a competitive advantage.

Anyway the injury will give them time together again. This time I don't think they will be able to leave each other again. Great chapter

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amyafa June 27 2014, 19:56:57 UTC
First off. No worries about letting us wait for your story to continue. A good story takes time. And you write a good story.

I will keep reading no matter how long it will take to find a new chapter.

Good luck with your surgery.

Great Chapter. Luke is a pro. Eye on the game. I was hoping for that goal. To bad there was a terrible player on the field.

But I am glad they can see each other finally. I hope Luke can go back to the states.

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scotianova June 28 2014, 20:27:07 UTC
actually I have no clue about soccer, but my first boyfriend was on a team and I do remember his bruises and more very well...

I am happy that Reid's taking care of Luke!

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