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CH.5 (ending)

Jan 13, 2009 08:21

Credit: CrossAngela almost cried, but she didn’t. She took a deep breath and reached for the phone. There was still more to do ( Read more... )

Comments 8

french_sex January 13 2009, 13:27:27 UTC

wonderful,wonderful ending! that got me sooo hot! I couldn't stop imagining that it was daddy and me. Thanks for writing this!

oceanbabiegirl January 14 2009, 00:40:40 UTC

You're the lucky girl!!!

upstageright January 14 2009, 05:46:20 UTC

Thanks. It was fun to write. It's easy when you have a good prompt to go from.
It wasn't 100% what you asked for, but once I started, it really wasn't up to me where it went.

masterhyde January 13 2009, 17:12:00 UTC

Great writing, but I would strongly suggest that this story would be a lot easier to read and easier to enjoy if it was formatted differently. If the font were just a tiny bit larger, and the text aligned left instead of center, it would be a lot less distracting.

french_sex January 14 2009, 07:04:47 UTC

shit. my bad.

masterhyde January 14 2009, 12:55:09 UTC

It happens. A lot of people don't think about these things until someone points it out to them. I design this kind of stuff for a living, so I'm more sensitive to it than most.

oceanbabiegirl January 14 2009, 00:40:20 UTC

Wow, I love the ending!!!! Great job.

upstageright January 14 2009, 05:48:56 UTC

Thank you.

I had fun with it. And apparently I wasn't the only one.