Pink Roses

Jul 03, 2011 04:52

Pink Roses // Jonghyun/Onew
Fluff / PG (? I mean there is only one curse word so...)
Jonghyun's in love with the office worker across the street. He wonders if he likes pink roses.

Something of a prequel to this

♥♥♥
I wonder... )

au, ○words should be illegal series, genre: fluff, x.shinee, rating: pg, titanic: jongyu, length: oneshot

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ruledaworld July 4 2011, 09:35:21 UTC
I actually close the window to the other part of this fic by accident (damn you iPhone!) but the comments would hav been fairly similar. In my opinon, most first person can come off a bit tricky & obvious that they're written by fan(girl)s and not a truly from the perspective of the character but OHMAIGAWD. I could not help but find both fics absolutely beautiful. While it can come off a bit obsessive, that's what love is and you can feel how entraced Jonghyun is by Jinki. When you're that into someone all you see is perfection and perfect little scenarios and stuff. God I blabbing. Anyway. Beautiful. Keep on writing. :)

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frenchtoast July 5 2011, 06:45:22 UTC
I get what you mean about both things ^^ I usually try to stay away from first person unless I ramble off feelings like this, haha.

I'm happy you liked Jonghyun's overly passionate love and thanks for reading ♥

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iamjinkified July 4 2011, 14:43:38 UTC
so beautifully romantic :3 I enjoyed this prequel as much <3 and I love the fact that it's in 1st person but didn't come out awkward or weird :)

And, as much as I can share jonghyun's sentiment towards Jinki, I am jealous of Jinki, being loved and adored oh so devotedly by someone like that. haha.

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frenchtoast July 5 2011, 06:37:04 UTC
Jinki's so lucky to be loved like that :3

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading~

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min7girl July 4 2011, 14:57:44 UTC
Aww this has the cutsies. I like the cutsies!!!
I'ma hug them now!

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frenchtoast July 5 2011, 06:34:53 UTC
Haha, it does. Thank you for reading!

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