Hi! I was trying to reply to your PM about the mood theme but it says you have not given permission to receive messages from people who aren't on your friends list so i'm typing it here -- hope that's okay
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I think this was a great fic. This is your first one so of course it won't be perfect but I really wish I couldve been your beta. the plot was great. I liked how it involved alot of sex but there was still a storyline. Unlike some fics I've read by people who just start & end with sex. Which is fine but after a while it becomes reduntant. So I'm glad this wasn't like the other Porno fics I've read. (I've read like over 100 maybe) but this was good. *TWO THUMBS UP FOR AWESOMENESS* xD
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