:] Yay another new member!!!!!!! We will definitely take over the world now :D welcome to the community and you wrote very nicely! I wouldn't have guessed that English isn't your original language if you didn't say so.
'Wow,act like a little pathetic school girl,I now have offically reached my lowest point in life.' xD Priceless line. I was laughing my firetrucking ass off when I read that.
Welcome to the community. :) Excellent first story. Very impressive for someone who doesn't have English as their first language. The image of Anthony making out with Ian in nothing but a towel shall be burned into my mind for the rest of the afternoon. :P
Aww, that was so cute <3 :D! I also love the little smutty ending >/////> *is a pervert*. Anyways, I was really surprised with your grammar. It was almost flawless :O! A few mispellen words here and there, but otherwise then that you could be mistaken for a regular person who's mother language is English :3! Another grammar issue though is the spacing. After a period, you have to put a space. I know, it's annoying DX. Not being mean, just saying. Otherwise then that, mother fucking sexy grammar though <3 ^^
Who doesn´t love smut?! Thank you very very much especially for your criticism!Well,I think I really need a beta but considering that all my friends don´t like slash so my dictionary has to do all the work. Your comment just made me all loved inside,thanks for that <3
I dunno who doesn't, every one likes porn once in a while XD. And np! I think you're fine though, it's normal to make mistakes :P. Yeah, my friends don't either. My one friend says that she likes the couple Ferard from the band My Chemical Romance, but she says it's just for entertainment. I drop so many hints that I'm a slash fangirl to her XDD Yeah, poor dictionary. And np again :3! I'm happy to hear that I made you feel happy ^^
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'Wow,act like a little pathetic school girl,I now have offically reached my lowest point in life.' xD Priceless line. I was laughing my firetrucking ass off when I read that.
Super sweet at the end. I just love fluff :3
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also ADORABLE!! lol cant wait to read more of what you write <3
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Excellent first story. Very impressive for someone who doesn't have English as their first language. The image of Anthony making out with Ian in nothing but a towel shall be burned into my mind for the rest of the afternoon. :P
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This community is just filled with so much love and cotton candy I think I´m gonna burst with it(in a good way,of course)
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Anyways, I was really surprised with your grammar. It was almost flawless :O! A few mispellen words here and there, but otherwise then that you could be mistaken for a regular person who's mother language is English :3!
Another grammar issue though is the spacing. After a period, you have to put a space. I know, it's annoying DX. Not being mean, just saying. Otherwise then that, mother fucking sexy grammar though <3 ^^
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Thank you very very much especially for your criticism!Well,I think I really need a beta but considering that all my friends don´t like slash so my dictionary has to do all the work.
Your comment just made me all loved inside,thanks for that <3
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And np! I think you're fine though, it's normal to make mistakes :P. Yeah, my friends don't either. My one friend says that she likes the couple Ferard from the band My Chemical Romance, but she says it's just for entertainment.
I drop so many hints that I'm a slash fangirl to her XDD
Yeah, poor dictionary.
And np again :3! I'm happy to hear that I made you feel happy ^^
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