Fic: Autumn Nights - The eighth night - Part 2

[freshtilapia]

I cruise along the streets to Rachel’s house and the song plays two more times before I finally pull up in her driveway and ends as I park the car without letting go of her hand, which, apparently, is a lot harder and more awkward than I thought.

I keep the engine running as she lets her iPod switch to a different song-neither one of us showing any

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[mjacton]

Hey! I don't have time to (re)-read this now, but how did you do this??? I think you can change the community posting to link to here if you want. :)

[freshtilapia]

Hey! I missed you by 0.01 second. lol

I was trying to edit the Tumblr post because some lines are single-spaced and then I remember that Tumblr posts have html codes so I copied the codes to the whole thing and cut it where it was supposed to be cut and posted it as html here on LJ then--BOOM! Post not too large. :)

[mjacton]

Yay, we finally got the "I love yous" and some physical boundaries broken down. Yes, you absolutely did make dry humping romantic and sweet without sacrificing the heat. I don't know how you do it, not to mention making "song fic" sections not only readable but absolutely engaging. I guess you're a miracle worker.

I'm still blown away by the end.

I second letyourdorkout, this is the perfect cure for all the angst!

[freshtilapia]

You get smiley faces!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D

Thank you so much best beta ever--well, you and Yorick lol even if I don't know Yorick. I just think Yorick is also a great beta. I'm assuming. Just seems like it lol

[freshtilapia]

OH MY GOD, MY WRITER HEART. <3

Thank you so much for the lovely, lovely comment, bb.

*hugs you tight*

[freshtilapia]

The amount of love I have for the amount of love you have for this fic is indescribable. Thank you so much, bb, for the comment.
*beams*

Yay!

Ahhh!

[phandomsock]

I love it, so fluffy and sweet and loving! I really like your style, it's distinctive.. you use ellipses where most won't and it helps the pacing and progression of the scenes. Brings us along (as readers) at your pace, instead of our own. :)

Agreeing with the line in the beginning, it WAS perfect for the first 'i love you' to be in the kitchen.. it's where all their milestone moments have been. Also, i liked that moment of hesitation from Rachel about removing her shirt, it's always like that, isn't it? 'If i do this, it all changes..' lol Good stuff.

Love it, read it as soon as i saw the link!

Re: Ahhh!

[freshtilapia]

Sorry it took a while for me to reply. I just didn't know what to say lol

Thank you for reading it as soon as you saw the link.

I'm so relieved that you loved it, after all this time and I am so happy to have brought you along with my pace and you seem to have it enjoyed it.

This chapter was really written around those 2 moments and it took a long while for me to get there but I finally got there lol

Thank you so much, bb!

[mm_burnttoast]

Super, fantastically amazing and totally worth the wait. :D

This was incredibly sweet, funny and hot. Gosh, I love this fic so much.

[freshtilapia]

Hee. Yay! Whew. I'm so happy you thought it was totally worth the wait.

Thank you so much! Gosh, I don't know what else to say.