Fic: Summer Mornings (3/3) - Part 2

Oct 30, 2010 19:27


Title: Summer Mornings-In Which Breakfast Will Never Be The Same Again-For Rachel Berry-And Quinn Fabray 
A/N: This is the second in a three-part finale.

Everything sucks )

summer mornings

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iceonthewing November 22 2010, 19:34:51 UTC
Favorite parts Vol III(1)

“Sorry. It won’t happen again.”

“What won’t?”

She hesitates.

“The, uhm, leaving…without saying goodbye part…”

“Oh.”

Does that mean…?

Rachel's hope is so adorable. This whole I-say-something-that-means-something-and-I-know-you-get-it-but-I-don't-say-it-directly is so accurate. *sigh*

“Well, I guess, I could just come back-”

“-Stay.”

She looks into your eyes and breathes, “Okay.”

I felt bad for Quinn, then not so much :)

“Are they dating?”

Quinn freezes.

Then she looks at you again and with a shaky breath, she asks, “Do you…want to?”

YES!

“I want to…take it slow…”

“Oh.”

THIS WHOLE THING. OMG WHERE DID YOU GET THIS IDEA?! IT'S FUCKING AMAZINGBALLS. LIKE OMG THEY ARE TALKING ABOUT THEIR RELATIONSHIP AND IT'S SO CUTEEEE!!!!11!! *breathes*

Even Quinn grins. And you catch her eye.

She mouths hey.

You mouth hey back.

*-*

“’Course you can! They even gave me a speaking part.”

“What is it?”

“Stop the violence.”

Awww it's way better now knowing that it was all prepared!

“We’ve always been one ( ... )

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freshtilapia November 26 2010, 10:50:37 UTC
“The, uhm, leaving…without saying goodbye part…”

I think Quinn’s hope is just as adorable there and we’ve all been through the whole I-say-something-but-I-won’t-say-everything-I-just-hope-you-get-my-meaning hehe

I felt bad for Quinn, then not so much :) -->LOL

“Are they dating?”
Quinn freezes.
Then she looks at you again and with a shaky breath, she asks, “Do you…want to?”
YES!
“I want to…take it slow…”

LMAO, thank you so much!!! This is definitely one of those wonderful things that just came out of the blue but naturally for me. It had to top the fake phone call (and I still like that one better) and r/q needed to have some semblance of security before the whole gang showed up. They had to have an idea of how they felt about each other and with Finn being there, this is what I came up with (it formed after I thought of “How did that happen?” “I fell… hard…” “What she said…” :)

She mouths hey.
You mouth hey back.That’s the first moment I thought of for the 21st morning. I don’t know if I’ve already mentioned this to you but I ( ... )

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cdn_torii November 30 2010, 06:28:45 UTC
pride and prejudice and a quachel chapter all in one. wow. i think you just made my year

great fic!! love it.

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freshtilapia November 30 2010, 23:31:27 UTC
wow. happy to have made your year :D

hope you have finished the rest of this and just left a comment in this part because of pride & prejudice. thank you so much!

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cdn_torii December 1 2010, 00:32:52 UTC
preeetty much had to comment because of p&p. its my fav movie. but not the keira knightley one. jennifer ehle and colin firth one.

and obvs i finished the rest because each chapter was unbelievably addicting. I'm happy I just realized you update now. instead of at the time. otherwise i would have gone crazy waiting for the next chapter.

so in summary. you rock. don't ever change.
this fic is epic. i love it. it made my year :)

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freshtilapia December 1 2010, 00:46:36 UTC
i love the bbc series, too (i have the dvd)! colin firth IS mr. darcy. and jennifer ehle grew on me as i kept on watching it over and over again. but i also love the keira knightley one, just not so much.

haha it's a good thing you escaped the long wait then. i really suck at updating (it took me 6 weeks before posting this whole last chapter). i hope you're interested with the sequel as well, which is Autumn Nights. I've already posted 2 nights for it and I plan to post once a week.

wow. thank you. so much.
i'm so happy about that :D

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kayceelee March 3 2011, 05:35:51 UTC
“Y u no lyk my cuddles?! :-(”

LOL! I totally would have giggled too. Dorky humor all the way!

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freshtilapia March 3 2011, 06:30:04 UTC
LOL! You're the only one who took the time to mention that.

I'm amazed by your selection. I can't help but make 'em dorky.

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phandomsock November 14 2011, 01:56:34 UTC
Roleplaying *snort*...;) and yet more mornings with the club, which leaves me with a chummy sort of affectionate warmth buzzing in my chest.

Rachel's histrionics regarding being annoying (she kind of is), Quinn's tenacity, and again i'll mention, that beautiful almost awkward fumbling around each other. So accurate for the beginning of a relationship, especially in teenage years. All of it, this is so Fuckin cute I can't even..

Good job, lady. Totally dig it and I shouldn't have waited so long to read it. :)

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freshtilapia November 15 2011, 18:30:54 UTC
I'm glad you gave it a chance even if it's been so long. And I'm really happy you enjoyed reading it. I dunno about beautiful but in my mind, it is really awkward--their fumbling around each other. And so adorable...

All of it, this is so Fuckin cute I can't even.. LOL I love getting reactions like this.

I'm very happy to have left you with a chummy sort of affectionate warmth buzzing in my chest. I totally got the same feeling from reading your comments. So thanks again :)

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