"Lady Madonna"

[freya922]

Title: Lady Madonna
Author: Freya922
Pairing/Rating: Gen; PG-13
Warnings: Adult language, angst
Word Count: 4,600
Summary: After the family moves on short notice, Mary realizes their new home is inhabited by a ghost with an alarming fixation on three-and-a-half-year-old Dean. She has to take care of the situation while keeping John in the dark.
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[mdlaw]

Good story....It would be great to learn more about Mary. m :)

[freya922]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[wataru_kisugi]

This is fantastic! I love the way Mary is doing the Hunter's work alone. And little Dean is adorable!! Great work!!

[freya922]

Thanks for your kind comment. I love little Dean, too - poor thing. I loved being able to dive into Mary and Dean's relationship before it all went so wrong.

[iontas]

So good and with such a gut wrenching end!

[freya922]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the ending. :)

[nytekit]

Very cool story! I love the way you depicted Mary going about this, doing what she felt she had to even knowing how it might hurt John. She was so methodical in trying to keep the supernatural out of her family, despite knowing she couldn't for long.

[freya922]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked the way I portrayed Mary. I kept thinking she must have been carrying some heavy secrets during those "picture perfect" years when Dean was a toddler...

[writhen_heart]

Ayy, this was awesome! I've never read much about Mary, but I got sucked right into this fic. Loved all the details about little Dean and Mary's worries. John being so distraught was something I could really relate to, very upsetting. Thanks for posting! :)

[freya922]

Thank you so much for reading. Yes, poor John! I felt so sorry for him in the end, though he wasn't the focus of the fic. I felt so sorry for all of them! :(