Old Age [Fic]

[frickin_cheng]

After a very long time of only RP, I finally buckled down and wrote a solo piece. I had one drabble in my head, and started writing it, and then got...this instead, something completely different. I'll probably (or at least try) to write the original one later tonight. :P

Comments

[vernajast]

Oh....oh, RP hasn't done anything to dull the edge of your writing. Beautiful, tragic, so very fitting. It's perfect, and I can see it so vividly. I've only tried to touch this subject once, and it was never quite like this. Well done!

[frickin_cheng]

*smiles widely, blushing* thank you so much. I was honestly a bit worried about it coming out too jumbled, or abrupt. It's hard writing without another person. XD

[anonymous]

I agree with Vernajast. Well done! This is a great solo piece! I can imagine the panic/desperation Kakashi must have been feeling when his 'hands scrabbled over the razor edge' of the blade, when he realized he wasn't ready to go. Most excellent read. Thank you for sharing this. :D

[moiyahatake]

This comment is mine (I agree with Vernajast. Well done! This is a great solo piece! I can imagine the panic/desperation Kakashi must have been feeling when his 'hands scrabbled over the razor edge' of the blade, when he realized he wasn't ready to go. Most excellent read. Thank you for sharing this. :D) but I didn't realize I wasn't logged in. *begs for forgiveness*

[frickin_cheng]

*laughs* <3 'course I forgive you. And I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^

[lecanis]

I adore you. And your Kakashi, and this fic. It's lovely oww. I wish I could dredge up more to say, but brain is in panic mode.

[frickin_cheng]

*blushes and hugs* thanks lovely. <3

And awww on panic. *hugs again* you can do it! <3