Fragile Chapter 4 "A Crimson Rose"

Nov 27, 2008 16:34

Title: Fragile
Author: fridayblues
Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Disclaimer: Ennis, Jack and BBM belong to Annie Prouxl. I'm writing from love and making no profit (and don't want to). Some main events in this not-so original story is based on the Japanese novel/series "Bara no Nai Hanaya" written by Nojima Shinji.
My Deepest Thanks: to judy_blue_cat--the beta babe who is better than ( Read more... )

fragile, fandom: brokeback mountain, writings: fan fiction

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torry28 November 27 2008, 10:16:34 UTC
I always had a feeling that it was Ethan involved with Megan and not Ennis, and it was because of what the doctor did to Megan that caused Ethan to slash his tires, he is so prospective of junior that its possible he is the father and not Heath but because of Ethan's young age they kept it quiet. I'm glad Jack came and told Ennis what he did but he is no longer doing it because he cares for them. And please Ennis, Jack needs you as much as you need him, help each other. Reach out an take a chance on love.
Thank you for the wonderful update, I will be on pins and needles until next time.
Have a wonderful weekend coming up.
Hugs
Torry

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fridayblues December 9 2008, 03:42:27 UTC
Torry :)
Thanks!
I'm late at replying once again but the next chapter is with Judy now. As I have said, this won't be a long story. I think we're where some secret would be revealed.
*hugs you tight*
Blues

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roby100 November 27 2008, 10:22:46 UTC
Dear Blues,
I told you that I was waiting for a new chapter and then my reading would start. Well, you wrote the chapter and now it's my turn to keep the promise: I will start my reading and I will let you know my thoughts.
You wrote "Some main events in this not-so original story is based on the Japanese novel/series Bara no Nai Hanaya written by Nojima Shinji": don't worry, they will be original to me because Mr/Mrs Shinji is not so famous in Italy!!!
A tight hug
Roby

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fridayblues December 9 2008, 03:43:28 UTC
*hugs*
Oh, Roby, you're so sweet! Thanks dear xxx

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elena_62 November 27 2008, 11:15:14 UTC
Hi, Friday!

Thank you so much for the long awaited chapter. At least now we know something more and the situation between Jack and Ennis is slightly less fucked up.

Of course I'm already looking forward for more.

Best Wishes!

Antonella

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fridayblues December 9 2008, 03:44:22 UTC
the situation between Jack and Ennis is slightly less fucked up

Um...I'm not so sure about that..

Thanks!
*hugs*
xxx

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annabuffy November 27 2008, 13:13:47 UTC
Very intense chapter. It's good that Jack was honest with Ennis and surprising that Ennis admitted that the letters were written to Ethan. But looks like the boys may be able to work through this together, hope so. Happy Thanksgiving!

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fridayblues December 9 2008, 03:45:51 UTC
Happy belated Thanksgiving to you, too.
Sorry I'm late at replying to your comment. Thanks for reading :)
THe next chapter is with Judy now and more secrets will be revealed.
Man, how I love your icon. LOL
*hugs*

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pattieono November 27 2008, 14:28:15 UTC
..oh,oh..........this is gonna get ugly between the brothers, isn't it?, Ennis was willing to run away from his own happiness before (Jimmy), but now Ethan is going to find some resistance. E is not going to drop everything and go this time!..........and whatever you do, don't let Junior take Edward to "show and tell" in school, 'cause what if he falls out of her bag and get chewed up by some dog on the street, or loses a little arm or something..........*sniff*..and...and........what was I saying?
Thanks for this Thanksgiving gift! mwwwwwah!!

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fridayblues December 9 2008, 03:51:46 UTC
this is gonna get ugly between the brothers, isn't it?
I hate to say so but yup, things are going to get ugly....
Well, it turns out I'm not that bad in writing angst after all. *beams with pride* heh.
*hugs* *smooches* *hugs* *squeezes*

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