Fragile Chapter 5 "Sweet Gerberas Part 1"

[fridayblues]

Title: Fragile
Author: fridayblues
Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Disclaimer: Ennis, Jack and BBM belong to Annie Prouxl. I'm writing from love and making no profit (and don't want to). Some main events in this not-so original story is based on the Japanese novel/series "Bara no Nai Hanaya" written by Nojima Shinji.
My Deepest Thanks: to judy_blue_cat, the beta babe who is better

Comments

[rt_in_town]

My dear Friday

[fridayblues]

Thank you so, so much for your comment, dear Alex. I was stunned at how well you understand the whole situation here, how all of the characters in this story are facing the difficult situation that brake all their hearts. But unfornately, they can't have it all and have to make choices.

The Del Mar brother's bond will have a great challenge this time. I hope they can overcome their own needs and can focus on a little girl's heart. Junior is very important for both of them. Now they seem to overlook her.

I wish I can be better in English so I can convey how thank you I am that you're reading this story!

Thank you so much again, dear. I'm writing the next chapter (part 2 of this chapter). Hopefully, I can post it early next year :)

Oh, Merry Christmas and happy new year!

*hugs*

Whoa!!!!!!!

[pattieono]

What just happened here?!!! Was Ennis so starved for affection that he fell so hard for a stranger?.....i'm afraid i'm going to agree with Ethan on this one. Just wait until Ethan finds out that this guy Ennis is so in love with, has another guy!!
Damn, girl! You were right; this is a darker story; everybody here seems desperate; to run away, to hide, to control, to love..............I'm so torn with this story, which is a testament to your storytelling. *applause*

Re: Whoa!!!!!!!

[fridayblues]

I'm so torn with this story, which is a testament to your storytelling

You're not the only one. LOL I had bad dream about this story the other night. *shrudders* It makes it so difficult to go back to Flea and write something happy la-da-da-da at the moment.

So, there's no Flea Christmas one-shot, or the new year one-shot. I'll keep everything for the sequal. *evil grins*

Merry Christmas and a happy new year to you!!!! Wish you the fabulous 2009 :)
Lots of love,
Blues

Fragile part 5

[george66]

Oh Blues

Re: Fragile part 5

[mariez65]

What an excellent summation, George! I agree with every word.

Marie

Re: Fragile part 5

[kmdlrd]

Amazing comment. I couldn't come close to saying it, but I agree with it completely. Great job, George. - B.

Re: Fragile part 5

[fridayblues]

Dear George

[eandj]

What did you silently agree on Ennis????
Can you forgive yourself for it?
And why calls Junior Ennis 'Daddy' when cleary Ethan is her father?
I have to admit that I have problems to totally understand why Jack is so overly distressed by his fathers illness. Sure he is his father, he loves him but- they don't have the best relationship. His Dad is a hard man. I don't say he shouldn't care- sure he would but so much???
This sounds hard but I can't explain better.
I always want to leave an eloquent comment because this wonderful story deserves it but I'm stuck with my poor english skills- damn.
Merry Christmas and happy holidays for you and your loved ones
Paula

[fridayblues]

Thanks for reading, Paula!

Well, I understand how you feel about Jack's father. We will hear more of the Twist in the next chapter. I hope that can answer some of your questions :)

Merry Christmas and happy holidays to you, too!! I hope you'll have a fabulous 2009.

Lots of love,
Blues

[elena_62]

Dear Friday,

Now I understand your answer to my comment on last chapter: yes, they are not exactly in a happy place *yet*. But I still think it is good that now both of them realised that they matter a lot to each other.

You are really doing a good job as a writer. I liked a lot Flea, and I like a lot Frigile, even with the quite increased angst.

I hope you'll find a beta soon. Thank you for writing!

Enjoy the holiday saison (but keep writing ;-)!

All the Best!

Antonella

[fridayblues]

Dear Antonella :)
Thanks!! Yeah, I've found a new beta, upon Judy's recommendation. But I don't have time to write yet. Maybe that have to wait a bit. Now cookies and cakes are keeping me occupied. LOL Blame it all on the holidays spirit heh heh
Happy holidays to you!
*hugs*