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Fragile Chapter 5 "Sweet Gerberas Part 2"

Jan 11, 2009 15:34

Title: Fragile
Author: fridayblues
Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Disclaimer: Ennis, Jack and BBM belong to Annie Prouxl. I'm writing from love and making no profit (and don't want to). Some main events in this not-so original story is based on the Japanese novel/series "Bara no Nai Hanaya" written by Nojima Shinji.
My Deepest Thanks: to jennydc, my new beta who saved my life ( Read more... )

fragile, fandom: brokeback mountain, writings: fan fiction

Comments 88

bowl_of_glow January 11 2009, 09:13:50 UTC

YAY!! I re-read the first three chapters of your story yesterday evening (I printed those out) and I was wondering when were you going to update again!
I don't have time to read now, I'll read it later, but I wanted to say THANK YOU!!
*hugs you tight*
B.

cornflake2912 January 11 2009, 09:15:27 UTC

oh no... things are getting very complicated. i somehow feel sorry for the doctor now. i don't trust him yet but maybe he isn't as evil as we thought?

poor jack... please make him and ennis find back together. :(

fridayblues January 14 2009, 08:38:15 UTC

Hi,
Thanks for you comment :) It's difficult writing about the doc. But there're many sides of him that we don't know.
xxx

torry28 January 11 2009, 09:29:34 UTC

The pictures are gorgeous, and I hope you get over the flu
quick. This is a wonderful chapter, Ennis and Jack making love only poor Jack thinks he will never see Ennis again, I'm only glad he is removing Shane from his life.I hope the Dr. will do all he can to have Junior and Ethan back safely with Ennis after he reads the letters of Megen.
And Ennis ask Jack to be part of his life. I know its only the fifth chapter and already I want it to be a happy, happy all the time, not very realistic but I so want them to be happy and together. Ennis, Jack, Ethan, Junior and her Grandfather and even John.
You write so beautiful, be well soon.
Hugs you very tight.
Torry

fridayblues January 14 2009, 09:02:18 UTC

Thank you, Torry!
I'm a bit better now. I will try to sleep earlier.

Well, this is not a long story, dear Torry, so we're heading to the end now. I think it should have about 10 chapters so things should be wrapped up pretty soon.

Thank you again honey. You're so great!
*hugs you back*

bowl_of_glow January 11 2009, 10:11:01 UTC

Ok, I found some time to read it, anyway ( ... )

fridayblues January 14 2009, 07:45:20 UTC

Hey :)
So you have time to read it anyway. Thanks for your comment. It's like sunshine on rainy days...
I still have cold but I have no one to blame but myself. I should sleep early but I have many books to study atm.
Haven't start writing the new chapter yet. Maybe this weekend.
Glad you like the poster. Yes, that's Ethan and he's the actor named Joseph Gordon Levitt who looks a lot like Heath. They used to be in Ten Things I hate about you together.
*hugs you back*

bowl_of_glow January 14 2009, 16:00:29 UTC

Yeah, studing is hard, I know what you mean! ;) And I keep going to sleep later and later every night!
take care of yourself, honey!
*hugs*
B.

ifyoucantfixit2 January 11 2009, 10:13:50 UTC

This was a real surprise to see tonight. I was really
glad to see it however. It was a very sweet and lovely chapter, but very bittersweet. It was also quite surprising for Megan's dad to be so normal and all. Specially since the history he has had with them in the past. I hope his brother brings Jr back, and they can work things out. That poor little girl is in such a precarious place. thanks jan

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fridayblues January 14 2009, 09:08:29 UTC

Hi Jan,
THanks for your precious comment! It made my day :) I planned to post this chapter before Christmas but anyway... Glad you enjoy it.
Junior is in a difficult place really and I wish Ennis and Ethan (as well as the doctor) will think of her when they do or say something.
Thanks again!
xxx