a first draft

[friedebe]

Never do I expose my babies unfinished, but this one seems to be able to take the cold, and is asking for a peek out the window

Comments

[in_white_light]

i love your fusion of the soul, light, and music.

[amyviking]

I'm normally not a poetry gal, but I really like that... proving once again that beth rocks my world. but we all already knew that

[selaplaya]

beautiful the way the first line personalizes the whole thing-- how beauty is compounded when you see it alone, or know that who you are with sees it too and it is not mass produced or immortal or universal at all but it is but-- see, i can't express it given an infinity of words and no need to be poetic, and you did it in a line. gracious, beth. you amaze me.

[wacky_kayaker]

are you going to wordstock?