✖✔ POSITIVE+NEGATIVE MEME - RP EDITION ROUND FIVE ✔✖

Sep 23, 2012 13:59

✖✔ POSITIVE NEGATIVE MEME - RP EDITION ROUND FIVE ✔✖

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dorpstrength September 24 2012, 12:38:54 UTC
✖ Undersounds ✔
muse: dorpstrength

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dorpstrength September 24 2012, 17:04:27 UTC
Your Kyungsoo is so cute it hurts. My muse cannot look at him without wanting to give him a big hug, because that's what he inspires with how sweet and considerate he is all the time. He is really accommodating and I like the ease with which he will run with whatever is going on. He has the elements of awkward that seem to haunt rl!Kyungsoo and all the endearing earnestness of the real, too. In short, love your Kyungsoo to bits and hope he never leaves.

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eyebaggage September 24 2012, 17:59:27 UTC
Oh, it's you. Hahaha! Okay, firstly, your Kyungsoo is awesome. Sehun and Kyungsoo talk so much, it's like crazy. They have so many things going on from their interests to quoting movies and YouTube videos on Twitter to trying to troll people on weheartit and even their little matching shimeji's on their profiles (okay, I'm the one who put that but yeah it's just so cute not to mention haha xD ( ... )

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nuizai September 25 2012, 10:09:51 UTC
Postive: He's the man.

Negative: He's too awesome.

...Ok that's not really a negative but what else can I say? I would want to scene more with your DO before M goes back to china and stay there for a while T^T And honestly, I love the relationship your DO has with the other members. He's like a really good best friend that'll be there for you when you need him.

Well, I can't really think of anything else to say (that I haven't said already in the past) so, I'll just copy sehun mun's exit line because I find it so funny. "I gueth.. thaths all" XD

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opaque September 24 2012, 14:21:02 UTC
✖ UNDERSOUNDS✔
muse(s): kkayoon

( She tends to be quiet, but please, any feedback would help. ♥

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eyebaggage September 24 2012, 14:53:30 UTC
✖ Undersounds ✔
muse(s): eyebaggage

If there's anything I need to work on which there probably is just lay it on me. u_u

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eyebaggage September 24 2012, 17:06:51 UTC
Nope, still wonderful.

Your muse still feels incredibly real. He leads a life that is by no means perfect, but he doesn't seem wrapped up in drama. He is a little awkward and a little unsure of himself, as real Sehun seems to be. But he works really hard with this level of determination to move forward and live life well that can only be termed as endearing. My kid is never letting him go.

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eyebaggage September 24 2012, 23:56:49 UTC
Nope, he's wonderful and all sorts but I'd agree with the person above, he does seem a little awkward but maybe my muse is awkward to him at first which is ironic because they are the closest but other than that, I wish we'd scene more so this hyung can get to know him better but he is glad for that one talk they had recently :3

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eyebaggage September 25 2012, 09:42:30 UTC
Nope, you're a hopeless case.

You're never going to get negative crit at this point. When will you ever learn? Stop going here because you're really, really good.

It's funny how insecure you are about your writing, when in fact, it summons up all these feels that people didn't think they could even feel before. For example, when my muse was distressed and approached Sehun... I was afraid that because he was young and inexperienced, he would just nod awkwardly and not be of general help. Boy, you proved me wrong. Somehow, it's like Sehun just knows what little gestures could mean and ultimately utilizes them to make my muse feel better. So what if he doesn't know what advice to give sometimes? He knows how to be a dependable dongsaeng.

Speaking of which, I must commend you on knowing how to find a balance of acting bratty and sweet. There's a very thin line between playing them at the right amount and going overboard, but somehow you just know how to make it work.

Thank you for letting me meet such a wonderful muse.

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ahjumma September 24 2012, 15:50:16 UTC
✖ RAKUEN_YODAN✔
muse(s): taenguin

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ahjumma September 24 2012, 17:09:26 UTC
I feel bad because we always want to bother her, but kid is too intimidated still to approach her too directly.

From all their interactions that she's initiated orz he has derived great amusement, though. We really appreciate how she is always reaching out and even with the busy-ness of both your schedules, so considerate of what's going on in her "family"'s lives. ^^

From one who does not mind the nudges.

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ahjumma September 24 2012, 17:20:34 UTC
I hope I can portray her as less intimidating in the future so we don't miss out on any possible interaction from your side. Hehe, until then, we'll just keep on nudgin'~

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ahjumma September 25 2012, 01:17:53 UTC
He needs to work on being less intimidated, too, so hopefully they find a middle ground. But really, she's only intimidating because she's so cool. ^^b

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lockpickey September 24 2012, 15:54:13 UTC
✖ barbuddha✔
muse(s): lockpickey

You can even go ahead say that I suck at time management haha

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