And it is that minor amount of danger that makes Fox love being a reporter, amiright? Oh Colin you can't ask him to give that up while you indulge your evil fancies.
I actually like the tone to that sentence that making it a query gives it. Sort of like 'is this going to get me out of this, or am I going to have to run?'
I personally like the hard-edged shading a lot. But perhaps it doesn't all have to be the same shade of black? It can still be hard and differ there. That might help the issues.
...argh, I'm editing it so much, but I finally realized what your hard shading reminds me of. this comic, when the artist uses it.
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Was the Herald Post who Fox had a rumble with so many years ago? Is that why he doesn't want her to announce who he is?
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yay employment! and for a paper that won't put his life in danger! theoretically! but probably doesn't have a photographer like derringer....
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No, no Derringer-like photographers. And only a minor amount of putting him in danger.
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True, but can Collin be expected to deal with the stress of Fox's minor amount of danger?
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I personally like the hard-edged shading a lot. But perhaps it doesn't all have to be the same shade of black? It can still be hard and differ there. That might help the issues.
...argh, I'm editing it so much, but I finally realized what your hard shading reminds me of. this comic, when the artist uses it.
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