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Dance in the Dark, Chapter Five

Mar 07, 2011 01:18

Title: Dance in the Dark, Chapter Five
Rating: NC-17
Note: Please note the rating and acknowledge that you are accepting full responsibility for reading this. You have been warned.
Pairing: Bellamy/Howard
Summary: Matthew Bellamy is a baker who's dragged on a blind date to a dance class where he meets Dominic Howard, the dance instructor.
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belldom, dance in the dark, slashfic

Comments 50

halfeatenmoon March 7 2011, 07:34:07 UTC

YAY MY FAVOURITE FIC!

I don't really have much to add except I have so much love for Matt when he offers to walk away because he can wait. I admire him there! It's so sweet.

(I kind of want to write fanfic of this fanfic. Not even slashy stuff, just fic about Matt baking, because omg you don't know how much I love baking. I should write a bakery AU of something myself because I love baking so much.)

frisky_biscuit March 9 2011, 05:01:03 UTC

YOU TOTALLY SHOULD.

I'm going to move it back to the bakery I think, after some intense porn. ;)

<33333333

stilettoxmafia March 7 2011, 08:07:08 UTC

Lovely!
I really like that Matt kept the playing field even and didn't lead Dom down a path. Dom chose it himself.

That was one hell of a cocksuckin'....

frisky_biscuit March 9 2011, 05:02:12 UTC

Aww. thanks, punkin!!!!!!!!!

<3333 I'm so glad you liked it

ashamedbliss March 7 2011, 08:14:54 UTC

JUST, OMG. no seriously I squealed when I saw this updated :P

god, just, so hot. Just like Dominic so eloquently put, moooooooooooooooore! :P

*hugs tight* amazing! ♥

frisky_biscuit March 9 2011, 05:04:10 UTC

Girl, you're so sweet!!! Thank you so much for reading, and for your comment! <333

thekeyholder March 7 2011, 08:55:02 UTC

Oh, this was perfect to my morning cocoa and croissant! xD

Dominic’s tongue was proving to be the flame that torched his lust soaked body.

This line will be burnt in my mind forever! <333

I also liked that Matt was so careful (so much self control!) and asked Dominic every time if he wanted to stop. Hot blow job was hot. :D

The last line... my thoughts exactly! Great chapter! <333

frisky_biscuit March 9 2011, 05:04:45 UTC

<3333333

Thank you so so so much, bb! I'm so glad you liked it! <33333

lov3s March 7 2011, 09:24:09 UTC

*gasps jibberish nonsense*

Matt grinned widely, realizing that the dancer must have never been properly sucked off. Dominic, you're in for some fun and sexy times, my dear.

That was one hell of a blowjob. My fucking god. this is the time where I wished I had a cock. And, omg, “More." FUCKING HNNNNNGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!

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frisky_biscuit March 9 2011, 05:05:51 UTC

Justice is the shit. :)

I'm so so glad you liked it bb!!!!!! So glad :D