[fic: white collar] Relentless as the Rain (3/3)

[frith_in_thorns]

Title: Relentless as the Rain (3/3)
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[daniel_shadow]

What a wonderful conclusion to the story. Thank you for writing this. :)

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you so much! Really glad you liked how I wrapped up :)

[robingal1]

oh, thank goodness. you've no idea how I was stressing about how this would end. but that, that was perfect. just the right blend of post trauma for everyone. and the return of the healthy banter? perfectly done.
thank you for all your hard work.

[frith_in_thorns]

I'm so happy you enjoyed the ending! Thank you very much :D

[ladyrose42]

The emotional turmoil of Neal's captivity and recovery is so wonderfully portrayed. It upped the angst level. Those little things that kept reminding him of imprisonment, like El brushing his hair away.

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you very much! SO happy that you enjoyed this :)

[sapphire2309]

I swear, I was blinking away tears the whole time. Neal as a ghost is such a contrast to the usual Neal that it just, it hurt a lot. And oh no, Peter! You are seriously evil. But you used Peter's stomach ulcer to fix everybody, so I guess that's okay. Neal realizing he'd forgotten to call Elizabeth just broke my heart.

Loved this anyway, though. It was amazing and perfect and I am so glad that we didn't see any more of Rebecca (though it was kind of necessary that we heard about her). Wow. Talk about a non sequitur. But I loved it! :D

[frith_in_thorns]

Awww, thank you so very much! (Also I felt incredibly mean while writing all this :P) I'm really delighted that you enjoyed this so much! ♥

[reve_silencieux]

Oh that was wonderful! I could just feel the tension and the quiet coming off of Neal. I felt so bad for him and everyone, really. They wanted to talk to him, but had to tiptoe around him in fear. It was a delicate situation, but I'm glad they're getting through it. Even happier that you had Peter get his sentence commuted. Nice twist of the show.

Beautiful, wonderful story. Loved it!

[frith_in_thorns]

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading! And especially glad that you liked how I wrote Neal in this chapter. I genuinely feel rather mean :P But I felt he had DEFINITELY earned his freedom after all that. Thank you so much!