[fic: white collar] Laws of Gravity (2/2)

[frith_in_thorns]

Part 1 // AO3

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[kanarek13]

Wheeee \o/ You posted ♥ *bounces

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you so much! :D And thank you again for the beautiful artwork! ♥ ♥

I wasn't actually expecting anyone at all to be familiar with the game :P When I was planning it out I decided first that I definitely wanted Elizabeth to be the one with the special powers for once, and then started thinking of different ways for the mechanic to work, and then considered the Bioshock canon and decided that crossing it over would amuse me exceedingly :D

It was definitely a lot of fun thinking up all the alternate worlds. And alternate relationships :D Again, I'm really really happy that you enjoyed reading this -- thank you again!

[reve_silencieux]

Wow, that was a fun ride! I really liked seeing it from Elizabeth's perspective, such a different feel from normal. It was interesting to see so many different worlds, so many different possibilities. There was a little bit for everyone too! P/N and N/S. It's a good thing Neal is good at thinking on his feet and could attempt to fit in everywhere. And yet, connect and feel for the other versions. I'm glad both of them had Mozzie on their sides at the end - the one person who would believe them!

Obviously, I'm glad Neal realized that his world would miss him, and he did have roots there. He could have been free, but he has his own family.

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you so much! I really enjoyed having Elizabeth be the one to drive the story -- I know I tend not to write her enough, so I was trying to make up for it here :) And I definitely couldn't help putting Mozzie in like that, he would be totally ready to believe something ridiculous like that!

And I'm especially glad that you liked the ending, with Neal choosing to return. Thank you so much for this lovely comment! ♥

[dennih23]

What a terrific idea and wonderful story. I love the different universes and the different versions of everyone. Elizabeth meeting herself, and the other El taking it in stride offering to help - seems to be level headed no matter what universe she's in.

Peter kissing Neal , especially Neal's reaction - well he thought about kissing Peter, better do it for the con :D

Fun, fast paced story all around. Thanks for sharing.

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you so very much! I love El as a character -- she always does seem ready to cope with anything thrown at her! :) The other universes were really fun to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed them. Again, thanks! :D

[sholio]

Well, you already know I love this. ♥ I love Elizabeth being the one to get special powers and play the hero for a change, something she rarely gets to do in fic. All the glimpses of other versions of them are heartwarming and heartbreaking by turns (I still feel awful for poor grieving Peter who got hit in the head with a brick!) and the reversal of expectations at the end, with the character relationships turning out to be quite different from the ones in our universe, still delights me. Oh, and I really adore all the Mozzies being the most helpful people that a dimension jumper could possibly meet! This is a fantastic fic and I'm absolutely delighted that you chose my prompt. ♥

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you so much! ♥ I definitely loved writing Elizabeth as being the one to carry the story -- I really don't write her enough usually. Thank you for your suggestions of alternate universes to drop both her and Neal into! (I still feel sorry for Peter, too. POOR PETER.)
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